what does that even mean? I will get my law?
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Fantasy · Kush63
You mean "I will settle the score with you" right? 🌚
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Fantasy · Kush63
Can't feel what he's feeling. 🤔 It might be life-threatening, yet it feels not so dangerous.
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Urban · QuantumVoid
It's no fun when the quests are so easy and not life-threatening at all. 🤔 People might get bored at a point because of this. Should've been more creative to create quests that might be interesting and thrilled to read. This is just boring. 🙄
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Urban · QuantumVoid
If you're writing in first pov format, you should write the dialogues in that way too. Try reading some first pov novels to get an idea how they write and describe things along the way.
"Soooo, how was your summer? Get a girlfriend yet?" Emma teased Caleb
Teen · SWBWG
chapter is too short and I can't grasp what's happening. even if it's a prologue, one should describe something that might give an idea to the reader what this story is about. Otherwise, you should have directly started with chapter 1. that would be better .
who's her?
I yawned and stretched, checking the time on my alarm clock, it was almost time. I got dressed putting on a flowy black dress with silver specks, they reminded me of the stars. I looked out side the window to see a bright blue sky and a bright sun, it was as if nature was mocking her. I slowly made my way down stairs, my dad was nowhere to be seen, but that was normal. As I slipped on my shoes I felt a silent tear make it's way down my face.
Teen · SWBWG
that was a bore. you need to put your soul into it. this novel was made up on the spot. no planning or any organised pattern at all. Keep working hard and improve your grammar bro/writing style. 🤔
too much info dump. I'm getting bored again. 🙄
but there was someone in college that Rex had used to like 'Lia' they got married only a year after getting the job.but this marriage could not last long and they got divorce after two years.
Fantasy · Hiddensoul_7
Oh, that's what he meant. But I don't know what this law is. I guess, I have to read a bit more.
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Fantasy · Kush63