This came off as incredibly forced, it was certainly a gross exaggeration of character making the King basically overly evil just to help the AU plot....If Rhaenys really marrys corlys then the story altogether is pointless. No one wants to read about some MC getting cucked lol ffs.
Liked your "Aemon Targaryen" novel so looked into this one....big disappointment honestly....already overly OP before even chapter 1....no thanks.
Fools like you should return the oxygen they steal from the rest of us lol. Your just butthurt cause your writing is terrible & heavily forced.... Take a writing class you pathetic dweeb lol.
cringe...
The fake humbleness of MC is just annoying af to read ngl....
This is just getting more cringe & forced....
What a completely pointless backstory. 1st chapter & its already bad....
Chapters are way to short...
Not worth continuing, clearly gonna be forced plot the whole way....the essence of the fighter fits of meeren & a coliseum is essentially the same. To act like this is some never before seen idea is just plain lazy & frankly stupid. Even after all the pointless info dumps have been removed, this is still bad.....
Couldnt even finish the chapter, dropped for sure lol.
House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'
Book&Literature · GOD_Official