The "pirate speak" is interesting to read it's a nice change
A bit rough around the edges but should improve as the author gains more experience writing but the parts where the narrator has to clearly say [leans head] breaks the immersion other than that pretty interesting
My Goal is a chapter every week I'm a slow writer but I hope I can get it to 2 chapters a week and so on.
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Bastard Monkey
Fantasy · Mustard_The_First
I will be publishing a new chapter whenever it is finished which could be a week or two or a whole month I want to make sure my writing is the best that it can be.
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Bastard Monkey
Fantasy · Mustard_The_First
I hope you enjoyed please tell me if there are any typos and where
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Bastard Monkey
Fantasy · Mustard_The_First
Hello, Everybody, this is the first-ever novel that I have decided to publish I hope you enjoy it and please don't hold back on your reviews I would like to improve as much as possible.
Sorry about the long wait I finished this chapter the day before but saved it until today to proofread
Bastard Monkey
Fantasy · Mustard_The_First