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2mth

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Do people in Asia always say a person's full name, or was this just a weird writing choice?

"Damn it, Xiao Minghao, have you still not found him yet." The woman suddenly asked in impatience.

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Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven

Banana_Phone17

2mth

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'A flying wolf. Since when do wolves fly? Wait, it seems to be wounded from some attack. Just what was it fighting to have such a large scar?' Randy thought as he watched the creature hovering in the sky above him.

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Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven

Banana_Phone17

2mth

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Mr yappington

"Even if your basic statistical data was better than all of the students in this class, without an awakened ability or compatible energy, it is pointless to dream of attending a university renowned for raising ability users and combatants for various occupations. So, keep that in mind as you make your future plans!"

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Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven

Banana_Phone17

3mth

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I feel like the descriptions of all these characters are the same just with different hair and eyes.

She had an elegant and beautiful porcelain face that perfectly accompanied her creamy brown hair that gently fell behind her back. Most eye-catching were her exquisite cheeks and rosy moist lips that could tempt any man who saw them. A pair of pure glassy eyes hid underneath thin-framed glasses that put further emphasis on her eyes, enhancing her beauty. Her swan-like slender neck, under which her delicate sexy clavicle and full front that was lightly exposed, only further added to her charm as her delicate waist and creamy white legs added the finishing touches to her peerless appearance

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Fantasy · Entrail_JI

Banana_Phone17

3mth

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Fantasy · NegansPalace

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Fantasy · NegansPalace

Banana_Phone17

3mth

Commented

Is he ever going to be fixed?

Lunging forward and slashing a dog as he spun to search for another, he continued to rhyme.

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Fantasy · NegansPalace

Banana_Phone17

3mth

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If they get together drop this

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Fantasy · NegansPalace

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Fantasy · NegansPalace

Banana_Phone17

3mth

Commented

Is there like magical gravity in this world? Because bro would be a pancake rn.

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Fantasy · NegansPalace

Banana_Phone17

10mth

Commented

Does his name ever change?

"I am not an just a bunny. I am THE bunny, by the way are you Shadowslash, right? Your mother is calling you back." The bunny started introducing itself arrogantly and taunting about Shadowslash being called by his mother.

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Fantasy · SHADOWSLASH

Banana_Phone17

1yr

Commented

The conversations between him and the maid seem kinda forced.

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Fantasy · Crimson_ink

Banana_Phone17

1yr

Commented

😐

"If you just so say, I will give up my life for you willingly."

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Fantasy · Crimson_ink

Banana_Phone17

1yr

Commented

I have a feeling that him being able to control Nether energy ia the key to moving him arm again. The author did hint to him getting it back at some point.

Unknown to him, Nathan's control over Ether and Nether had increased many folds during the past three days.

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Fantasy · Ryukurou

Banana_Phone17

1yr

Commented

Is he still 5, 7? Short king I guess

Age: 16 yrs (???)

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Fantasy · Ryukurou

Banana_Phone17

1yr

Commented

Golden eyes. So im guessing the one who fought Nathan in the dream was him.

His golden eyes shined like a fiery sun, and his sharp look made him extremely handsome, even with his disheveled clothes. He had a majestic aura around him that made him appear graceful as he walked.

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Fantasy · Ryukurou

Banana_Phone17

1yr

Replied to _Bruh

Isnt he a child currently? I doubt he would weigh enough to reach over 120mph

Nathan had already surpassed 120mph, and his speed was still increasing. Like a bomb dropped from the sky, he was also going to explode if his descent didn't slow.

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Fantasy · Ryukurou

Banana_Phone17

1yr

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I'm honestly pretty disappointed. In the beginning of the novel it was really interesting. Of course the concept of him transmigrating into a novel he read was cliche, however it was done well. The mindset of Zick was unique and fresh. He wasnt a cringey webnovel edge lord you would expect with his past, and actually grew as a person. The world was interesting, and the magic was better. However things slowly went down hill. After his first battle he kind of hot boring. The concept of him trying to keep himself together was interesting, but then he just magically fixes himself by being boring and plain. He had no personality, unlike before where he portrayed himself with a smile. Inside he was the same, but strived to be better. And this whole self search thing happens again multiple time, making him more of a generic webnovel character each time. My final straw was with chapter 109. Instead of using the logical way of making sure he was not detected as a rich figure, he instead wasted 4 of his precious mana bombs to wipe out a village of innocent civilians. Mana bombs he needed because he was in a weakened state. He already knew that he was the strongest person there, and no one would be able to detect him. So he could have just interrogated the chief, and killed him after getting his things. But he just wiped out the village because it was an "effitient way to prevent others knowing his status." That is the lamest excuse ive ever heard. I think a crater of a village is more suspicious than one dead chief. This honestly seemed more of a ploy to try to make Zick seem more like a boring edge Lord, and justify his want to use people to make the golem. His change ruined the entire feel the beginning of the novel gave. I read in the reviews about the story getting boring after 100 chapters, but I wanted to give it a try. But I made a mistake and started a novel that I will never finish.

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Fantasy · chaotic_1

Banana_Phone17

1yr

Commented

Stay in school kids. Hes a prime example of that.

"Woah, they made it possible for me to transfer into a VR like environment? Not too shabby." He commented, thinking how all that is happening is still a game.

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Games · Campoccino

Banana_Phone17

1yr

Replied to ExSoldierLv99

Nope. By not sticking with plot rules that were created before. Even if the fact that it was burned so he can health his arm, he could just cut off the burned part. The mc is smart enough to understand that. And now potions cant heal burns.

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