Ronvoli

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Ronvoli
Ronvoli
3 years ago
Replied to bob_the_building

you do know what a papaya is right?

The papaya girl lowered her head, and her two slender index fingers were rubbing against the corner of her clothes uneasily. She was like a quail that had been captured.

Absolute Great Teacher

Absolute Great Teacher

Eastern · Missing You Washing Red Beans

Ronvoli
Ronvoli
3 years ago
Replied to SageEnds

sometimes "S" is used as a short version of "Sadist"

Even the others, including Shirotsuka Sanae, got startled by the result. They even killed an A-rank beast. Normally, the students would get shocked by an A-rank beast that could also use magic.

The Magician of Sound

The Magician of Sound

Sci-fi · Fixten

Ronvoli
Ronvoli
3 years ago
Replied to Jovira

i mean he did tell her twice lol

Ronvoli
Ronvoli
3 years ago
Replied to kingthekingthing

thats why he smelts iron and uses that on it

Since he knew that the bones, Wyvern's hide as well as the Phoenix cloak were all immune to the effects of fire, he thought rather than sewing all of the three components together, he used molten iron to fix the bones and the Wyvern's hide together. Once it cooled down, he proceeded to chip away the excess part of the iron, then he repeated the same process again to permanently fix the Wyvern's hide over the Phoenix cloak.

The Rise Of A Porter

The Rise Of A Porter

Fantasy · AkshatArpit

Ronvoli
Ronvoli
3 years ago
Commented

good luck on the job!

Ronvoli
Ronvoli
4 years ago
Replied to Syam_Sundar_7103

it normaly updates every other week or so, but author said that something came up and that was the reason that there was such a big gap. Also writting isn't something easy to do, there are tons of books that took years to make

Ronvoli
Ronvoli
4 years ago
Posted

~Disclaimers~ • English is not my first language. • Long. Skip to the parts that matter for you • Spoilers are at the end and still very vauge, so i did not check the spoiler box (Please tell me if i need to change it) • I did not finish this novel! I dropped it with around 30 chapters left. ~Writing~ Mostly it's fine, some mistakes here and there, but understandable. My Problem is the fight scenes. They are too long. Fight scenes are supposed to be written as quick as possible. This does not happen here. Even the fights that last for a few seconds, are around 4 long paragraphs. Don't get me started on the metaphores, for example something like this <He looked like a skyrocketing flying eagle and a mad dragon dragon at the same time!> Also the author likes to use Optimus Prime as a comparison. ~Story Development~ Starts very good. Even got me to cry. The romance has a bad start, but gets better, sadly gets worse again. And then it starts to get bad. It's slow and still has some good moments, but it makes story decisions that i hate. Some of these decisions are at the very end ~Character Design~ Can't remember a single character, besides the fact that some are europian. ~World Background~ I think it is good? Can't really say, to be honest. It seems pretty consistent to me. It does an okay job at using the sci-fi element. What bothers me is the fact, that it says continents are no longer seperated, but they are clearly differences. ~Why I dropped~ I dropped because i was getting frustrated. I had started forcing myself to continue with around 200/300 chapters left. Didn't want to feel like I wasted my time reading so far. But then I cried, because i was so done. Maybe i can get myself to finish those 30 chapters in the future. But for now I am done. ~Should you read it~ It is honestly hard to say. But since I had tons of fun in the beginning: Yeah try it! Don't expect a masterpiece and skip parts, if necessary. But please don't force yourself, it isn't worth it. Thanks for Reading. Below are a few story decisions I hate. [Spoiler] • Mentions character, but doesn't show him, so much it gets annoying. • Kills of a character, 100% dead, Mc had his corpse in his arms. 200+ chapters later, turns out character is still alive. • Cripples character, comes back but stronger • Male character gets raped, gets ignored that it happend. • Kills of important Character, for around 10 chapter. • Female character gets raped, shows of her body in front of a ton of people, other character decides that she is "his" woman

Ronvoli
Ronvoli
4 years ago
Commented

take your time with new chapters! i rather have slow updates, than you burning yourself out and dropping the story. I have seen that so many times and it is always a shame