Nice man, I'll use this if you don't mind? I'm going to rewrite this fic.
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Anime & Comics · FanfictionLover
Man, that was so illogical. It ruins the immersion tbh.
"On second thought that wasn't a good idea...but is this for real? Am I a sayan?" I muttered in a skeptical tone right after looking around waiting for someone non-existent to show up laughing saying that this was all a big prank and somehow explaining that I wasn't crazy. The possibility that I was dreaming appeared and disappeared soon after, the headache being more than enough proof that this was indeed the reality.
Movies · Nanashi11
U for real? So if you're in MC's position you would think that you're a Saiyan? Just because you have a tail? Lol. If so then you wouldn't last probably a month and die there. The fact is that Dragon Ball is completely fictional! It is illogical for a person to think that they're a Saiyan because they woke up with a tail attached to their body, gosh. The first thing that should come to your mind is "How did I get here?!" and not "Oh I have a tail, I must be a Saiyan no doubt".
"On second thought that wasn't a good idea...but is this for real? Am I a sayan?" I muttered in a skeptical tone right after looking around waiting for someone non-existent to show up laughing saying that this was all a big prank and somehow explaining that I wasn't crazy. The possibility that I was dreaming appeared and disappeared soon after, the headache being more than enough proof that this was indeed the reality.
Movies · Nanashi11
It's only "4 meters" back when I read it. Maybe he changed it.
Machop was startled by the sudden voice and quickly turned around to find a person taller than he was smiling at him.
Anime & Comics · Plug_O_Stien
I'm alive btw, as for this fic I am planning on rewriting the whole thing, not all, but most. I have another account and I had earned more experience in writing a story there, so I want to turn this fic into something a little bit more interesting than it initially was along with my first ever book (This is my second book btw). So yeah, I'm still "planning" to do it as I'm currently occupied with a lot of things such as college. I really wanted to write the story, but because I already repeated a grade last school year, I couldn't risk repeating this year once again.
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Anime & Comics · FanfictionLover
There's nothing wrong with giving your MC cheats that would help them to become strong, the problem lies with the character and on how you deliver the story with MC having cheats. The readers seek an interesting story to read, so getting an MC with overpowered cheat and is apparently a genius that could learn anything in a day makes it lame (no offense) as it is too overused, that they could search and find the same thing in hundreds of books here in Webnovel (That includes my first book). As Stan Lee said. "Making your character so powerful it could do anything and everything, only makes it uninteresting". I'm not saying that you should stop tho, I'm just hoping you could learn from Stan Lee's wise words as it could help you on writing your future books. Good luck.
I'm Asian bro...
I understand. Real men loathe Ntr after all.
He just decided to meet June the first thing after the shooting ended.
Movies · DreamThree
Didn't that happen quite a few years ago? I heard that they even made a new law that prevents the same thing from happening again.
Thank you
Sunshine in Fairy tail?
Anime & Comics · FanfictionLover