looks like she melted rather than teared up lol
this is getting ridiculous. 18 coins per chapter or 2 fast passes? you think we're made of money??
you sure? seems like buildup material to me :v
The only thing that they were really short on now was Mecha technicians who had experience with multiple nations' patterns of Mecha. Every Reaver company wanted them, and the stations around the planet needed them, but they weren't something you could just stumble across by accident.
Sci-fi · Aoki_Aku
Author needs reviews, so here's an early one from myself. I'll do my best to avoid spoilers! This here is a fun book on reincarnation, the life of a theoretical turned practical, with the joys of applying the practical to the theoretical. The MC of this often cliche yet charming/engaging novel has his quirks and moments throughout the story within a beautiful picturesque setting, described fairly by the author themselves, it leads to enjoyable moments when reading yet still leave you wanting more, be it chapters or simply an explanation at the moment rather then several chapters in. Writing quality is not perfect, as any novel is, and otherwise describes anything and anything well enough to get the point through, on rare occasions being a typo. story development I will give a 4 star rating for now, mostly due to an early review but also due to the fact that the author seems to avoid giving details of crucial points around said chapters and that personally annoys me when it pops up 12 chapters later. Character development I personally love albeit a tad rushed in a few aspects so 5* on that with nothing to comment on. constant stream of updates! as I speak there is a mass release ongoing so theres a plus! however I am not paying 3000 coins a month for the full amount of chapters bleh. world background needs work. definitely so. As of now it feels like every word in the dictionary is being thrown into a setting and sometimes it's a bit much for me, otherwise the point still gets across and I can still sort of envision the environments when needed. (Author, for inspiration I recommend reading "80ears of signing in at the cold palace" as its superbly descriptive and immersive!) I'm going to have to cut this review short as I'm at work and I apologise for any typos and or sentence structuring that seems off as I'm in a bit of a chaotic place at the time of writing. I hope this gives readers a glimpse of what they're in for without the spoilers.
yuupp...must run in the wisp family
Did they not detect my sarcasm, or were they just airheads?
Fantasy · Magecrafter
thanks auto correct
I has the EQ that's for sure
just one?
"!!!" Natashia's eyes glowed blood red, her cheeks turned a little red, something started to drip from her private part, and her nipple became a little hard.
Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
does the bro code apply....to the bros tho?
badump, Badump. (Doki, Doki)
Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
no it's not....remember when he jumped the wall lol
This was the first time he had been shot to death by an arrow. The destructive power of such a Dharma treasure was even more powerful than needle-type Dharma treasures.
What If I Can't Die?
Eastern · Infinite Sand