should ot be dinner since the merting is at 2pm?
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Urban · Little_North_Star
valerie here not frankie
At the end of the day, Max walked Frankie to the bus stop where she took the bus on regular basis.
Urban · Author_fredah
xiao xiao is nick name or it should be ye yan here
Xiao Xiao sat in the car, using her phone as a mirror, she indeed saw a large mold stain on the back of her neck.
Urban · Eight Crows
rely on Frankie
"Max?" Valerie called, snapping him out of his psychotic thought and she said, "I may rely on Valerie in that mansion but you're the only one who can truly help me. You're the only one who I can put my hopes on."
Urban · Author_fredah
set up small area for lady right?
Mina watched the interaction and wondered if President Lee would be a good father. She knew he was gentle toward children because she had seen him interact with many of them, but she wondered if he would be hands-on like Troy or hard working like her father. A smile crept onto her face as she thought back to how the man set up a small area for Sadie to play in his study. He could have easily sent her with Tara, but he wanted to keep his eyes on her because he knew it was what she would have wanted, and he was right.
Urban · Shenyechi
This story really gives me an emotional roller coaster. I hate ian sometime, and i hate mina too sometimes. i feel so piss off with lisa and luna most of the time. i had to stop reading at times before i became too emotional. so overall, it's a very good story and sorry writer, i prefer to wait for the story to be completed so that i can read without the eagerness to wait for the updates, hence the comment now.
now australian not british?
I dialed a number and it rang for a short while before I heard the same strong Australian accent from the other end.
Urban · Kerik
no should be said by cala i think
"No," Fiori whispered harshly. She rambled out the complete truth to Fiori, whose gaze darkened.
Urban · Shenyechi
it should be willow instead of olivia here i think
"I told her everything I did and why, but she told me she never cared about people finding out." Oric turned his face to look at Connor who was sitting in a nearby chair. He propped himself up on his elbows as a sign that he wanted his friend to keep talking. "She didn't tell me anything, but there must be something we don't know." Oric had felt that Olivia had overreacted back then, but he was not a fourteen-year-old girl, and he could not place himself in her shoes, so he simply determined her actions to be justified.
Urban · Shenyechi
wealthy husband...
Xia Shuyuan, watching the car disappear, ran his hand through his thinning hair, puzzled, "When did that girl get such a wealthy son-in-law? How did I not know?"
We Married in a Flash After One-Night Stand
Urban · Wan Ge