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62 ch 5 stars~! First of all, stability of updates. 2ch per day. No comments. Second of all, writing quality. It`s fine. ˙ᵕ˙ Splendorous world background. I already like it. Seemingly inspired by LOTM but quite original. Good character design. Story development. Fine... but... maybe too long? For example, Nysa's parts show the story from a different perspective. It`s good but just too long. I am not really interested in her pov, so (in my opinion) the length needs to be reduced a bit. (づ ᴗ _ᴗ)づ♡ And... the pace of the story needs more speed. Also, we have more chapters about others characters than the protagonist, which is not very good. The protagonist seems kind of smart. But he is a bit too emotional/impulsive sometimes? Also, I'm not a weirdo who wants the main character to be a chaotic evil murder hobo, however I don't like irrational characters. If, let's say, there was a ritual requiring some innocent people to be tortured for secret knowledge. And the protagonist wouldn't use it because he "has standards". I will be a little... disappointed. (╥﹏╥) However, despite everything, this story deserves 5 stars. ♡⸜(˃ ᵕ ˂ )⸝