'I hadn't eaten anything good in weeks that day.' Wait, how can it both be weeks and just a day?
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Is it just me or is this intro too average? It should be more chuuni, something like becoming the supreme god or something?
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Why would you post a spoiler for your own story like that!? At least give a warning bro!
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He'll become the verb 'explore' that's specific to the corners of the world?
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I couldn't write with as many typos as this author does if I tried. It's actually impressive in a way. I would only recommend this story to my worst enemies. So that they might suffer and convulse in sheer agony from every single use of "in" being mistyped as "on" throughout the fic.
Madara in the Avatar World
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