my second and last review as an author for Biohuman... Man, I gotta say, its's such an honor to write something I've been ruminating on for years! Biohuman is finally ended and if you haven't read all of it or are waiting for it to finish, go and read! Now that I'm done with the book I can say characters are great. I like making relatable characters, different dynamics and putting them in a world not so different to ours. Lee Seng may not be the BEST character, but who isn't perfect? It's a slow read and the free chapters will really allow you to either push through it or not. Writing, in my opinion, does get better .there are mistakes as my eyes cannot see everything 😭 but I tried my best to write something interesting. Definitely potential for me to come back and explore the world, but for now... Thanks for supporting me! Follow me on Instagram and Twitter @reiverus_ You'll see what I'm up to and eventually another story will happen.
Thanks for the review! I am English speaking. Everything written is written in English. If it feels translated, it isn't.
hahaha yeah, it is. I wrote it knowing I'd probably get a response like this .
"The only person who's been in and out of me is my brother!" Lee Seng pointed his sword at the woman. She raised an eyebrow at him and Lee seng cocked his head. "Wait, that sounded wrong…"
Urban · Reiverus
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
I wasn't thinking about it then but it does fit.
Lee Seng spent most of the time catching up on books he hadn't finished. He had just read a book about a boy and a dragon and wondered if things like that could be real. The fantasy books of old were often long, but they were well worth the read. Lee Seng felt like he was reading into a small part of his reality. Even if the books didn't line up with the modern era, he knew the information could come in handy.
Urban · Reiverus
It's a Korean Last name that sounds close to Ock/Oak. but yes, that's her name
"Olivia Ok. I'm headed to Gymnasium C. Where you going?" Olivia shook his hand. Lee Seng let a smile out.
Urban · Reiverus
A fellow author must have time to read, too, right xD I'm really digging Shadow Slave so far. I like the titles, names of skills, characters. They're really unique and the theme of Sunny's whole schtick is so satisfying. I'm only 19 chapters in, but I definitely am craving for some more! Great world building so far! I think that Chapter 0 really helped give a lot of background information but the author does a great job in explaining in the Novel as well. keep it up!
I love that even his name foreshadows what he is. It fits the theme so well
[Wake up, Sunless! Your nightmare is over.]
Fantasy · Guiltythree
So I was right with my Kdrama brain 🤣
And here he was, able to enjoy an unlimited amount of pristine, delicious air like a second-generation chaebol.
Fantasy · Guiltythree
There's a tiny bit of romance. Not a lot, though.
Biohuman
Urban · Reiverus