comes in, write peak, refuses to elaborate, pc crashes, leaves.but I seriously miss this one, I loved it
As is tradition, I will shamelessly rate my own work and give it a perfect score, and no one cam stop me!
well, this was supposed to come out yesterday but oh well! as always tell me your thoughts, liked it? nah? something you're expecting from the story? I'd liek to hear it
how was the first chapter? good? bad? was it too short or was the length good enough? comment your thoughts, I know the first chapter isn't something you can base a lot out of but I really wanna know what you think.
not at all, it's actually the manga that doesn't go into explaining his powers beyond surface level, and I really don't want to go on a rant on how it works so I'll just simplify it, keyaru's power works in two parts, by controlling those two stages he can make his skill [heal] do things it was conventionally made to do, such as you said, disintegrate and or completely changing the body of a person (something the manga has yet to get to) and saying that's the reason he was able to escape because of heal is wrong because he did that ny using the alchemy ability he stole so you're wrong there as well, heal only works on living things. but in the end, I agree that it's my fault to except a fanfic to follow the source material since fanfiction isn't for that purpose
man that was a good first chapter, also the established early goals that sound complicated and already keeping me on edge to see how it goes from here, spectacular work.
just as the founding fathers intended...something ain't right about what I just said...
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Villain Academy
Sci-fi · Mirrond44
I'll consider some of those but considering how the rewrite is izuku won't have the time to learn half these things
besides the choice has already been made
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original In MHA as a martial artist
Izuku midoriya, since he was a kid he learnt that all men were not created equally. in a world were 80% of the population has a superpower called quirk, the 20% being of older generations than deku he was laughed at and bullied for not having one. but one day after trying to save his childhood friend and long time bully, and getting scolded by his idol in life, while he was returning home sad and depressed, he found a wormhole that took him somewhere were he could gain the power he needs to become what he wanted7 Chs 567 Collections
A really wonderful start that I didn't expect, I hope the series keeps the quality through and through
Shounen's Guide To Shonen Bullshit
Action · FuwaPowa