Mister_santana

I'm really enjoying it, just because it's set in this period and in such a situation. The system also seems well-balanced and supportive, rather than being an absolute overpower narrative armor. But it's perfect. For me, so far, it's perfect.

Why are his father's and mother's names the same as Genghis Khan's? Are they really them, or is it just his choice

Finally, a new fanfic of Martial World in these parts, this refreshes my spirit. The few that exist haven't gone very far, I hope the fellow daoist continues and doesn't perish on this journey.

Nice

So far, everything is going very well. I'm eagerly anticipating MC's development as he ages, even though mentally he's 24. I hope this doesn't lead to him gaining levels of authority too quickly, as if he were 10 or 11, making decisions that would typically be unlikely for someone his age. For instance, creating a secret organization sounds quite unrealistic to me, as I often see in some works where the MC, still a child, manages to convince others to do so. If you prefer a more realistic development without taking creative liberties, then perhaps avoiding such scenarios would be beneficial. In my opinion, And as for how you're doing, it's very good.

I'm having some problems with studies and I can't write much, but I'll still continue the fanfic, maybe today I'll post another chapter.

THX

I already decided to kill Lin Ming on the demon continent.

I think about ten chapters or less for Lin ming to appear, about killing Lin ming I'm still in doubt whether to kill him in the holy demon continent or in the divine realm