Jordan_Ayres

Jordan_Ayres

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2020-05-25 Joined United Kingdom
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Jordan_Ayres
Jordan_Ayres
1 days ago
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poor guy, spent centuries gaining power with the goal of saving humanity only to be killed and his remains be perverted to ruin humanities efforts to hide from the sun

Jordan_Ayres
Jordan_Ayres
2 days ago
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did anyone else stress out about their tongue for a few seconds?

Jordan_Ayres
Jordan_Ayres
6 days ago
Replied to Kama_

not for a good long while though, also he'll probably just renovate the area to keep the specter locked up but accessible, could use it as a personal base for resisting the champion. after implanting the seed he will learn a lot about the enlightened ones so he will probably be able to figure out how to power the "prison" and use it like a normal containment unit, and allowing trusted shields access

Jordan_Ayres
Jordan_Ayres
8 days ago
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maybe this has something to do with nicks advancement too, he been stuck at peak fanatic for a while. I feel like author would want to keep with the trend he has set of advancing in unique ways like he has since the veteran advancement. maybe the peak adversary or maybe even initial eternal has some method to lift him to the next rank while also transferring its power, feels like the right time

Jordan_Ayres
Jordan_Ayres
10 days ago
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so, he's gonna unlock the secret of the implants allowing further study of the most advanced era in human history, the ones that probably came closest to defeating the sun

Jordan_Ayres
Jordan_Ayres
15 days ago
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I feel like they're gonna get close(ish) and then she'll find out resulting in a short fight where she dies. seems on theme for this novel

Jordan_Ayres
Jordan_Ayres
18 days ago
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graphic

As the slush of meat hit the ground, black fur poked out, and just a bit later, six rats burst out of the sack of flesh liquid.

Kill the Sun

Kill the Sun

Fantasy · Warmaisach

Jordan_Ayres
Jordan_Ayres
18 days ago
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yeah, that scale doesn't really make any sense. wolverine should be a the top followed by Deadpool, they can literally come back from a drop of blood with wolverine only having an edge because of the adamantium. then thanos he's a tough bastard but nowhere near as endurable as the self healing types. but bond and Dr strange are just human with DS having mystic training but nothing to enhance his endurance

Jordan_Ayres
Jordan_Ayres
20 days ago
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seems like an envy characteristic to me. 80% of the population living comfortably while the rest slave away to make ends meet outside the safety of the walls

Jordan_Ayres
Jordan_Ayres
20 days ago
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the right thing to do is climb a tree and start sprinkiling explosive pebbles over them before detonating and claiming the xp

Alex watching the show, took out a piece of meat from his inventory and began to eat. It just felt like the right thing to do at the moment. 

Apocalypse Baby

Apocalypse Baby

Fantasy · DoubleHush

  • The Power System original

    The Power System

    Horror SYSTEM COMEDY WEAKTOSTRONG MYSTERY DARK SUPERPOWERS OVERPOWERED ANTIHERO RAREBLOODLINE

    A long dead species, a budding power, a mysterious lineage. Millions of years after a prophecy was uttered of a destructive hybrid with power to rival its god level ancestors we meet Marcus an arrogant and lazy teenager who has always been skating through life and has always struggled to find his place, but after falling into a mysterious cave he unlocks the power of his ancestors the mysterious "Powers That Were". Armed with this he will explore the world to end the crisis becoming known as "the rising" and save humanity from the unknown threat behind this catastrophe. Can he unlock the secret to his destiny or will he fall back into the sidenotes of history? DON'T BOTHER READING, I'VE DROPPED THIS ONE SO I CAN REWRITE IT AS I WASN'T HAPPY WITH ANYTHING AFTER THE 3RD CHAPTER. I'VE GOT NO TIMELINE FOR WHEN I WILL RELEASE MY REWRITE AS I WANT TO PLAN IT PROPERLY. I'LL BE TREATING WHAT I'VE ALREADY WRITTEN AS A CRAPPY FIRST DRAFT. THE BASIS WILL BE THE SAME BUT HEAVY EDITING WILL TAKE PLACE. THANKS Jordan.

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