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Renegade_Gamer
male LV 13I'm a single father and a workaholic. I loved to write back in my younger years and never had a chance to write while raising my kids. But now with some free time, I do my creative writing.
2020-05-22 Joined Canada
This is was a really good read. I started to feel for the MC and her plight, and although the story was really short, I quite enjoyed the story. Some minor grammatical errors, but they were few and far between. Very good.
Thank you very much for the amazing review. I like to hear about how people like my book and their thoughts. And I'm doing this all on my own and doing my own editing, so if you or anyone finds an error, please, feel free to comment and ill will correct it. Thanks again for the review.
I was two points off on both stats. My original idea was to have the strength and dexterity go up by either 2 or 3 each level. I scrapped that cause it would have made things much harder to keep track. Thank you for showing this to me, I will fix it. The future chapters will have corrected stats though. I did write this chapter, and up to chapter 20 inside a couple days. And i wasn't writing down everything at first.
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
I'm really enjoying this book. Keep the chapter coming.
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original The Game of the Worlds
A young man was living with his parents at the edge of a forest. Their life was quiet and peaceful. But one day, catastrophe struck them. A vessel of unknown origins descended on the small family. What happened next, no one knew. The boy awoke in a mysterious land, with high tech and mystical stuff all around him. He was no longer on earth. However, he is accompanied by a strange new system that makes him stronger, and some ghost or something that can change shape. He is the only one who can see this being at first. Now he has to embark on a journey to find his parents, and to figure out the limit of this new system. Join Lance on his journey through the stars. Help him find his parents and get back home. He's gonna need all the help he can get.128 Chs 305 Collections
To Lance, it does. Lol
"I don't wanna know what kind of fun you want to have. Either way, can we get back on track?" Lance was feeling less embarrassed, though, in his mind, no one has ever seen him naked before today.
The Game of the Worlds
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