Cristian_Matos

male LV 14

Loving life.

2020-05-22 Joined Global
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Cristian_Matos
2 months ago
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First of big fan of the novel, my only criticism is India. Him finding a love interest should happen at some point don't get me wrong but this early into his rise seems off putting for some reason. He has enormous goals to achieve and having someone who says he is "different" but turns around and demands his phone is again off putting. Would love to see more of Arell keep grinding his skills and learning to perfect his art as well as his state of mind, also side arcs about his friends and what their perspective is on finally making it out of a horrible living situation. Keep up the good work, this novel has kept me engaged since the first chapter!

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Cristian_Matos
4 years ago
Commented

So where is the influence Of the system? Shouldnt Jason been offered special objectives to complete during those games? In fact its been quite a while Since the last time Jason upgrade his physique or anything having to do with his game through the system.