FryingDragoon

FryingDragoon

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Hi 😊 👋👋 This account might not have an owner in the future... Escapism is a false paradise but also a painkiller to some extent. Just don't take an overdose...

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FryingDragoon
FryingDragoon
1 years ago
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Why did I immediately think that Yu Miao is seducing all four of the brothers? 😅😅😅

"Yu Su, how can you speak to Miaomiao like that?" Yu Su's second brother and manager, Yu Hong, happened to be walking up the stairs. When he heard the conversation between the two of them, he immediately walked over quickly and shielded Yu Miao behind him.

Rebirth: I Made a Comeback in Showbiz

Rebirth: I Made a Comeback in Showbiz

Urban · Mountain Springs

FryingDragoon
FryingDragoon
1 years ago
Commented

Makes me wonder where all these kidnappers were when I was kid.

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Even when she and Yu Miao were kidnapped by the kidnappers, they did not hesitate to choose Yu Miao and push their biological daughter into the sea.

Rebirth: I Made a Comeback in Showbiz

Rebirth: I Made a Comeback in Showbiz

Urban · Mountain Springs

FryingDragoon
FryingDragoon
1 years ago
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She thought that she could be with her family from now on, but her parents and brothers felt that she was narrow-minded, selfish, and unpresentable since she grew up in an orphanage.

Rebirth: I Made a Comeback in Showbiz

Rebirth: I Made a Comeback in Showbiz

Urban · Mountain Springs

FryingDragoon
FryingDragoon
1 years ago
Commented

Was the fourth brother kidnapped as well?

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Perhaps it was because she was blessed but was not destined to live long. When she was four years old, she went out with her fourth brother and was kidnapped by human traffickers.

Rebirth: I Made a Comeback in Showbiz

Rebirth: I Made a Comeback in Showbiz

Urban · Mountain Springs

FryingDragoon
FryingDragoon
1 years ago
Commented

I can already see the infatuated older brothers who will intimidate any eligible bachelors.

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Yu Su was originally the youngest daughter of the Yu family. She had four older brothers before her, so the old couple of the Yu family doted on this daughter very much.

Rebirth: I Made a Comeback in Showbiz

Rebirth: I Made a Comeback in Showbiz

Urban · Mountain Springs

FryingDragoon
FryingDragoon
1 years ago
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The MC's (Ethan's) character is very relatable and understandable. His character development and the depiction of the ruined world around him is very accurate and vivid, thanks to author-san's outstanding writing abilities. The narrations are not oppressive at all when I'm reading. I find myself enthused by the imagery and the flowing storyline. The necessary dialogues also helps to build the narrative and they don't feel unnecessarily squeezed in at all. There have been zero errors in writing, as far as I've read, which is rare to find these days. Conclusively, I do believe that this story has tons of potential, which makes it a hidden gem in every way. It is highly recommended to lovers of apocalyptic settings or weak-to-strong protagonists.

FryingDragoon
FryingDragoon
1 years ago
Commented

I can feel agrophobic feelings already kicking in on my side.

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With a deep breath to steel himself against the uncertainty that lay ahead, Ethan locked the door behind him. The metal key turned with a finality that seemed to echo in the emptiness of the hallway. Slowly, he descended the stairs and emerged into the dim light of early evening. The sun had dipped below the horizon, casting long shadows that stretched out before him like dark fingers grasping for stability in an unstable world.

Horror: Sanctuary Compromised — a Zombie Apocalypse Tale

Horror: Sanctuary Compromised — a Zombie Apocalypse Tale

Horror · Darkodia

FryingDragoon
FryingDragoon
1 years ago
Commented

'What he could lose' A.K.A his life 😅

Before stepping out, Ethan took one final look at his apartment. His eyes swept over the workstation, the kitchenette, and the silent row of succulents. The man who walked out that door felt unlike the same one who had hidden behind its security. The walls remained, but their purpose had now shifted. They were no longer barriers that shielded him from the world; they were now reminders of what he could lose — and what he could gain — by stepping beyond them.

Horror: Sanctuary Compromised — a Zombie Apocalypse Tale

Horror: Sanctuary Compromised — a Zombie Apocalypse Tale

Horror · Darkodia

FryingDragoon
FryingDragoon
1 years ago
Commented

How do instant noodles taste with peanut butter?

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Ethan walked briskly to his kitchenette. He reached into cupboards and drawers, gathering what little food and supplies he had left — several cans of beans, a jar of peanut butter, some packets of instant noodles, and a bag of trail mix. A quick survey of the fridge added a few bottles of water and some perishable items he knew wouldn't last long. All of it went into his backpack, along with a first aid kit from the bathroom and a flashlight from the utility drawer. He also grabbed his most recent tech gadget, a portable phone charger, before zipping the backpack shut.

Horror: Sanctuary Compromised — a Zombie Apocalypse Tale

Horror: Sanctuary Compromised — a Zombie Apocalypse Tale

Horror · Darkodia

FryingDragoon
FryingDragoon
1 years ago
Commented

I'm really curious how a 3-year-long shut-in who actually exercises looks like. (Probably healthier than me who can't do a single push-up)

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That thought acted as a catalyst, breaking the inertia that had gripped him. With a newfound resolve, Ethan turned back to his computer. He minimized the lines of code, opening a new browser window to search for the quickest route to Jane's apartment. Even as he did, he realized there was something else he needed to do first — prepare.

Horror: Sanctuary Compromised — a Zombie Apocalypse Tale

Horror: Sanctuary Compromised — a Zombie Apocalypse Tale

Horror · Darkodia

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