Gaburieru

Gaburieru

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2020-05-16 Joined United States
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Gaburieru
Gaburieru
1 years ago
Replied to RingoBrown

LMAOAOOOO I just got this

"Ricardo…" He said under his breath. "It's all up to you now."

The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

Fantasy · Gaburieru

Gaburieru
Gaburieru
1 years ago
Replied to 50points

Hahah how did I take this long to see this! XD Thanks

Gaburieru
Gaburieru
1 years ago
Replied to T_O_K_Y_O

Thank you so much for this! I really needed this! First let me say I apologize to you and any readers who did not like what happened here, my job is obviously to make you guys happy, and maybe with the right direction I can change this scene. But let me atleast explain the reasoning behind this The moral of this entire story isn't based around MC's love affairs or his Harem, I apologize to readers if this is what they want but that is not the driving for behind this scene or the story. This Chapter was about two things. The first was Prince spilling his heart out to someone for the first time, and him feeling the love that is burried in his heart, and the second is the burning fuel of revenge that has tainted his soul. I wrote this chapter to show how ugly Prince really is, and how he is willing to sacrifice how he feels to obtain his goal, and I wanted this character Marlin to adopt his ways. This Chapter is the transition chapter for Marlins character ark, where he starts to become more like Prince. After hearing your thoughts, I think that is the problem with the chapter. Everyone was invested in Prince and Meri, and he just tosses her to the side for some cuck. But I did this purposefully, to show how ugly people become when they are hurt. Prince is hurt by his inability to really open up to people about who he truly is, and Meri is hurt by Prince's rejection, and in those moments they become ugly, a theme that will soon carry to Marlin. I will see if I can improve this chapter however, I understand now how the reader feels thank you! And if you have any additional thoughts please feel free to post them!

He stripped off her clothes, tearing them to shreds as he ravished her body with kisses. And on that hill in the middle of day, in the warmth of the sun. Marlin took Meri's virginity.

The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

Fantasy · Gaburieru

Gaburieru
Gaburieru
1 years ago
Replied to Gaburieru

try not to use profanities lollll

He stripped off her clothes, tearing them to shreds as he ravished her body with kisses. And on that hill in the middle of day, in the warmth of the sun. Marlin took Meri's virginity.

The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

Fantasy · Gaburieru

Gaburieru
Gaburieru
1 years ago
Replied to Gaburieru

your messages got deleted by something maybe the system can you message again?

He stripped off her clothes, tearing them to shreds as he ravished her body with kisses. And on that hill in the middle of day, in the warmth of the sun. Marlin took Meri's virginity.

The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

Fantasy · Gaburieru

Gaburieru
Gaburieru
1 years ago
Replied to T_O_K_Y_O

Do you mind sharing your disappointment? Many readers dislike this chapter why is that?

He stripped off her clothes, tearing them to shreds as he ravished her body with kisses. And on that hill in the middle of day, in the warmth of the sun. Marlin took Meri's virginity.

The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

Fantasy · Gaburieru

Gaburieru
Gaburieru
1 years ago
Replied to T_O_K_Y_O

SHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!

"Well he's quite handsome isn't he?" Silvio said, scratching his chin.

The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

Fantasy · Gaburieru

Gaburieru
Gaburieru
1 years ago
Replied to T_O_K_Y_O

Hahah because he sees Marlins potential. He's trying to lead him down the right path. Yeh Marlin is super simp rn sorry hahaha

"I was just like you! It was my best friend who slept with my girlfriend! A girl I had never even kissed that I promised my life to, cheated on me with my best friend! If I was able to recover there is no way you can't either!"

The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

Fantasy · Gaburieru

Gaburieru
Gaburieru
1 years ago
Replied to T_O_K_Y_O

Hahah dude Marlin is best character in Prince low key, he gets better

"Prince…" Marlin said quietly sobbing to himself "You treacherous bastard... I'll kill you!"

The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

Fantasy · Gaburieru

Gaburieru
Gaburieru
1 years ago
Replied to T_O_K_Y_O

Very true, She is a VITAL role in the story as you will later see

"No" Prince said. A fierce fire of ambition burned in his eyes. It was almost as if Sir Ivan had given him a key. A key that could unlock his wildest of dreams here in this humble abode.

The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

Fantasy · Gaburieru

  • I AM THE MOST EVIL MAN IN THE WORLD! EVEN THOUGH I'M A CHILD! original

    I AM THE MOST EVIL MAN IN THE WORLD! EVEN THOUGH I'M A CHILD!

    Fantasy ACTION REINCARNATION R18 COMEDY WEAKTOSTRONG HAREM SUPERPOWERS TRANSMIGRATION VILLAIN KINGDOMBUILDING

    "Hello reader! I am Lord Sirius, the most evil man in the entire world! How evil you ask? My date once stood me up on Valentines day, and for revenge, I removed the patronizing holiday day from all existence! That's right! February only has 27 days now! Accept for on a leap year... But even then there is no 14th! This story is about how I, the supreme ruler of the world, was tricked and turned into a child! Losing all my power I was forced into a new reality where instead of my overwhelming powers of darkness and destruction I was given the power of light! How pitiful I have become! But no matter! Enrolled in the villain Academy for students, I will reign supreme and one day once again take over the world! For I am STILL the most evil man in the world! Even though I'm a child!"

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  • The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness original

    The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE HAREM TRAGEDY BETRAYAL KINGDOMBUILDING HISTORICAL

    4.83

    Betrayal is a wound that every man has felt, I wrote this story to show how it can make a man strong. "What is the difference between a hero, a villain and a coward? A hero uses his sword to protect people A villain uses people to protect his sword Both are better than a coward A coward has no sword, and uses empty words to protect his life A sword is not just a man's weapon, it is a man's ambition, and without ambition, a man is merely a coward. In order to be a hero or a villain a man must have ambition. The difference between the two is where that ambition lies." -The Dark Prince In 17th century France, the rich nobles control the world with a magic system called "Artifacts". Prince an innocent hearted prince of the Bourbon Kingdom, one day has his life thrown into chaos by betrayal, and inherits an "Artifact" that is the ancient spirit of "The Dark King". Through misfortune after misfortune, Prince eventually loses everything and starts his life over without a royal name. Prince vows to make his way back to the top hiding amongst the everyday people of France. Prince is a Japanese style light novel based on Machiavelli’s classic "The Prince". Although this work takes influence from it, the story, quotes, and characters are all completely original. It is mostly the concept of good and evil that is borrowed from Machiavelli.

    184 Chs 3.4k Collections

  • Re: The World of Shifters original

    Re: The World of Shifters

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION COMEDY WEAKTOSTRONG SUPERPOWERS SLICEOFLIFE ISEKAI ANIME ACADEMY

    4.76

    In a futuristic power struggle between three races, Humans, Shifters, and Alchemists a teenage boy is unknowingly born with the power to stop it all. " I'm... 200 years in the future? Can a loser like me... really start over?" Lars the loser, was the smallest and weakest kid in his high school. Everyday he was shoved into lockers and beaten to a pulp. When his high school bully beats him into a coma, Lars draws his last breath thinking. "Am I going to die a loser?" When He awakes from his coma, he finds himself reincarnated to the year 2230 , inside of an academy. And that he is no longer a human, but he is now a Shifter, a being with supernatural powers. Lars, now on the body of a Shifter named Axel, sets out to become the strongest Shifter in his academy. Learning from the bullying he experienced in his first life, he sets off on an adventure to become the strongest. However, as he navigates through the academy he has premonitions of a great tragedy that he realized he had dreamed about in his previous life.

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  • Dropped X5 original

    Dropped X5

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION WEAKTOSTRONG ISEKAI ANIME ACADEMY

    " I'm... 200 years in the future? Can a loser like me... really start over?" Lars the loser, was someone who nobody noticed nobody saw and no one respected. When his high school bully beats him into a coma, Lars draws his last breaths thinking. "Am I going to die a loser?" When He awakes from his coma, he finds himself in a another world in a distant future, and that he is no longer a human, but he is now a Shifter, a being with supernatural powers. Lars, now on the body of a Shifter named Axel, sets out to become the strongest Shifter in his academy. Learning from the bullying he experienced in his first life, he sets off on an adventure to become the strongest. However, as he navigates through the academy he has premonitions of a great tragedy that he realized he had dreamt about in his previous life. The picture in this book cover is not mine, if you would like me to take it down please contact me.

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  • Dropped X2 original

    Dropped X2

    Sci-fi ACTION SYSTEM ISEKAI VIDEOGAME HIGHIQ FUTURE MULTIPLELEADS SURVIVALGAME

    "On Planet Hage the games were all we had." " The rules are simple. Everyone has a gun and if your HP Bar drops to zero you die." "We are sent to this planet as criminals in debt. The games and bounties are how we buy our way to freedom." "Everything was going fine, until one day an 18 year old boy landed on the planet. After he landed he changed the games forever, and after that the entire world came to know... Justice" This story takes inspiration from Squid Game, and Alice in Borderland, if you enjoyed those you will certainly like this The image I used for the cover is not mine, if you would like it removed please contact me

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  • Dropped X9 original

    Dropped X9

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE SYSTEM HAREM ISEKAI VIDEOGAME

    "Outer Heaven" The place where one can start a new life of Paradise. The world is suffering from a huge surge of suicides that are done in pursuit of a land called "Outer Heaven". According to a cult, if you place a brand on your arm and chant magic words, after dying you are transported to a new world of paradise. After losing his fiancé in a devastating catastrophe, Lucius, an arrogant man who had never known loss commits' suicide, transporting him to this new world. When he gets reincarnated as an Angel, he receives a strange system that Allows him to rival the god of Outer Heaven himself! But as he spends more and more time in this Sanguine Paradise he begins to question whether he truly has made it to heaven, and sets out on a journey to find the truth of this mysterious place. "Holder of the book of Revelations, the end times have come, what is your message of fate? Will you choose light or darkness?" "Quest completed!" "Access to the Evangelion system has been granted"

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  • My Shifter Academia original

    My Shifter Academia

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE WEAKTOSTRONG SUPERPOWERS SLICEOFLIFE ACADEMY

    4.91

    In the 21st century, an event known as the Great Shift of 2030 destroyed 90% of life on earth. A new race known as the Shifters emerged. 200 years later, countless wars divided what was left of civilization into two areas: The city-states controlled by the crime fighting SPA, and the badlands controlled by lawless bandits. Axel, a powerless Shifter in 2230, has vivid dreams of future events that never seem to come true. He has dreams of Joining the SPA academy and becoming an agent, but he is unable to deal with a bully at his local school. As Axel progresses and becomes stronger he begins to wonder, if his dreams are just dreams, or are they warnings from the future of a destiny he cannot escape? “1352 times I’ve been shoved in lockers, drowned in toilets, and beaten to a pulp...And yet, everyday I come back here, patiently waiting for that day....” Axel thought “You're trash! I kick your butt every morning but you never seem to get the message! Why don't you go back to where you came from? Why don't you quit this school you powerless loser!” Pb yelled into his face “Because… I believe in my dreams.” Axel began "I'm going to beat those dreams out of you!" Pb yelled kicking him in the stomach. Axel spat out a wad of blood, and looked Pb directly in his eyes. “I’ll never stop dreaming. You can beat me up as much as you like, but as long as my heart still beats, as long as my mind still thinks, I will continue to dream! No one can come between a man and his dream! The only person who can stop a man from dreaming is that man himself!” “Tomorrow is the day all this changes! Tomorrow is the day my dreams become Reality!” This novel was originally posted on Royal Road, and now I am bringing a rewritten version here. I am the original author. This story occasionally features images and manga panels. You can see the images by clicking the links at the end of each chapter. They are not necessary but they provide a better viewing experience. WSA Entry- Superpowers Updated daily The illustrator, Mo's Instagram is below @degamishiro https://www.instagram.com/degamishiro/

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  • Rewrite for Spirity original

    Rewrite for Spirity

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE SLICEOFLIFE ACADEMY LIGHTNOVEL SHAPESHIFTER

    In the 21st century, an event known as the Great Shift of 2030 destroyed 90% of life on earth. A new race known as the Shifters emerged. 200 years later, countless wars divided what was left of civilization into two areas: The city-states controlled by the crime fighting SPA, and the badlands controlled by lawless bandits. Axel, a powerless Shifter in 2230, has vivid dreams of future events that never seem to come true. He has dreams of Joining the SPA academy and becoming an agent, but he is unable to deal with a bully at his local school. As Axel progresses and becomes stronger he begins to wonder, if his dreams are just dreams, or are they warnings from the future of a destiny he cannot escape? “1352 times I’ve been shoved in lockers, drowned in toilets, and beaten to a pulp...And yet, everyday I come back here, patiently waiting for that day....” Axel thought “You're trash! I kick your butt every morning but you never seem to get the message! Why don't you go back to where you came from? Why don't you quit this school you powerless loser!” Pb yelled into his face “Because… I believe in my dreams.” Axel began "I'm going to beat those dreams out of you!" Pb yelled kicking him in the stomach. Axel spat out a wad of blood, and looked Pb directly in his eyes. “I’ll never stop dreaming. You can beat me up as much as you like, but as long as my heart still beats, as long as my mind still thinks, I will continue to dream! No one can come between a man and his dream! The only person who can stop a man from dreaming is that man himself!” “Tomorrow is the day all this changes! Tomorrow is the day my dreams become Reality!” This novel was originally posted on Royal Road, and now I am bringing a rewritten version here. I am the original author. This story features images and manga panels so it is a light novel manga hybrid. You can see the images by clicking the links at the end of each chapter. They are not necessary but they provide a better viewing experience. The illustrator, Mo's Instagram is below @degamishiro https://www.instagram.com/degamishiro/

    24 Chs 23 Collections

  • Taken down for spirity original

    Taken down for spirity

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE R18 SYSTEM COMEDY HAREM VIDEOGAME

    What would you do, if the first time you booted up into a VR Cyberspace Universe, you got the most Overpowered weapon? This is a system story where Everyone has a system! Except the main character, who has the Most OP System that he gets from his weapon! WPC#166 entrant Ken Ouroboros was a disaster child. From the moment he was born, he set everything and anything he touched into absolute chaos. Known for hating rules and cockily challenging authority, Ken was on the brink of being sent to jail for his brazen misdemeanors. But when a man gives him access to Cyberscape, a game set 1000 years in the future where thousands of online players fight over a large galaxy, he gets the most powerful weapon the "Cyberblade Plasma" from a loot box at level 1! However this comes with a huge price. On his first time playing the game 10,000 players invade his world to try and steal the weapon! The missile barreled through the air, blasting a hot trail of fuel behind it. As it sped towards Ken, it made an ark in the sky that added another flash of neon to the already vibrant city. As the missile came within a few feet of hitting him, Ken closed his eyes. “Focus….” He popped his eyes back open, raising his blade to meet the speeding missile head on. Positioning his blade in the center of its diameter he indented his blade into its tip. After penetrating an inch deep, he swiveled the blade around the edge of the inside of the missile barely cutting into its surface. Sweeping his blade around, he slashed the missile’s exhaust and thrusted it to the side. “Hehe Juicy” Ken gagged BOOOOOOOOOM!!!! The missile drifted off into the distance exploding into a section of cars far behind him. “That's impossible,” Wei Chen said, dropping to his knees. “He manually deflected the missile… That's not possible! he would have to have gone around the entire infrastructure, chamber of explosives and exhaust in the blink of an eye… That's simply not possible!” “You there!” Wei Chen yelled “Are you smurfing! What in the hell was that! No… you’re hacking! Even a Max level player couldn’t do that! What the hell are you?” The Image I used as my cover is not mine, if you would like me to take it down please contact me.

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