Hahah how did I take this long to see this! XD Thanks
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Fantasy · Gaburieru
Thank you so much for this! I really needed this! First let me say I apologize to you and any readers who did not like what happened here, my job is obviously to make you guys happy, and maybe with the right direction I can change this scene. But let me atleast explain the reasoning behind this The moral of this entire story isn't based around MC's love affairs or his Harem, I apologize to readers if this is what they want but that is not the driving for behind this scene or the story. This Chapter was about two things. The first was Prince spilling his heart out to someone for the first time, and him feeling the love that is burried in his heart, and the second is the burning fuel of revenge that has tainted his soul. I wrote this chapter to show how ugly Prince really is, and how he is willing to sacrifice how he feels to obtain his goal, and I wanted this character Marlin to adopt his ways. This Chapter is the transition chapter for Marlins character ark, where he starts to become more like Prince. After hearing your thoughts, I think that is the problem with the chapter. Everyone was invested in Prince and Meri, and he just tosses her to the side for some cuck. But I did this purposefully, to show how ugly people become when they are hurt. Prince is hurt by his inability to really open up to people about who he truly is, and Meri is hurt by Prince's rejection, and in those moments they become ugly, a theme that will soon carry to Marlin. I will see if I can improve this chapter however, I understand now how the reader feels thank you! And if you have any additional thoughts please feel free to post them!
He stripped off her clothes, tearing them to shreds as he ravished her body with kisses. And on that hill in the middle of day, in the warmth of the sun. Marlin took Meri's virginity.
Fantasy · Gaburieru
try not to use profanities lollll
He stripped off her clothes, tearing them to shreds as he ravished her body with kisses. And on that hill in the middle of day, in the warmth of the sun. Marlin took Meri's virginity.
Fantasy · Gaburieru
your messages got deleted by something maybe the system can you message again?
He stripped off her clothes, tearing them to shreds as he ravished her body with kisses. And on that hill in the middle of day, in the warmth of the sun. Marlin took Meri's virginity.
Fantasy · Gaburieru
Do you mind sharing your disappointment? Many readers dislike this chapter why is that?
He stripped off her clothes, tearing them to shreds as he ravished her body with kisses. And on that hill in the middle of day, in the warmth of the sun. Marlin took Meri's virginity.
Fantasy · Gaburieru
SHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
"Well he's quite handsome isn't he?" Silvio said, scratching his chin.
Fantasy · Gaburieru
Hahah because he sees Marlins potential. He's trying to lead him down the right path. Yeh Marlin is super simp rn sorry hahaha
"I was just like you! It was my best friend who slept with my girlfriend! A girl I had never even kissed that I promised my life to, cheated on me with my best friend! If I was able to recover there is no way you can't either!"
Fantasy · Gaburieru
Hahah dude Marlin is best character in Prince low key, he gets better
"Prince…" Marlin said quietly sobbing to himself "You treacherous bastard... I'll kill you!"
Fantasy · Gaburieru
Very true, She is a VITAL role in the story as you will later see
"No" Prince said. A fierce fire of ambition burned in his eyes. It was almost as if Sir Ivan had given him a key. A key that could unlock his wildest of dreams here in this humble abode.
Fantasy · Gaburieru
LMAOAOOOO I just got this
"Ricardo…" He said under his breath. "It's all up to you now."
The Kind Prince Who Became An Evil Lord of Darkness
Fantasy · Gaburieru