wrong, re-read
"Did you go easy on me and Gerion?" Tygett asked, a mixture of gratitude and frustration in his voice.
TV · Ninja_King_3834
it's really old dependent upon execution. I've read good uses of the story element and bad ones. it really just comes down to the author's capability when they do that
He remembered wanting Tony Stark's mind. Memories bubbled to the surface, bright and accessible, but without the weight of emotional freight that Tony carried. He was thinking more logically now, surveying his surroundings with a clarity and exactitude that had never been his before. This kind of intelligence could remake him into an analyzer, a tactician, a Sam Witwicky who would take down any complicated problem with confidence and panache. Looking ahead, Sam was ready. Whatever this world might throw at him, he would be prepared, and he knew it was much more than just living; it was about thriving.
Movies · Theshadowveil7
I really, really, want to know the context of the whatever the hell is going on in that gif
With a roll of his eyes, Galahad gave him a cake too.
TV · Ninja_King_3834
this paragraph makes no sense. I don't even know what you're trying to say here. if you're implying that there was a phone book available that just so happens to have a fixer's number in it, you're crazy
This book has been deleted.
runner*
This book has been deleted.
no it's a designation of what type of run are you are. this at least isn't incorrect
This book has been deleted.
so what is me the main difference in this rewrite
Chapter 1: A man named Alex ( rewrite)
Movies · Theshadowveil7
hmm, almost seems like it would be sacrilegious amongst some of the people in the world. or it could be on the opposite end and be seen as a great honor
It was a longbow, simple and unadorned, but with an elegance that spoke of quality. Crafted from the wood of a weirwood tree, its pale, almost ghostly color gave it a distinct look. The hemp bowstring felt sturdy under my fingers, it promised durability and strength.
TV · Ninja_King_3834
hmm. now that's interesting, it's almost as if you read that in the story or something. nah that'd be crazy
Moments later, the door to the birthing chamber swung open, and Maester Creylan stepped out. His expression was calm, his voice steady. "The mother and babe are fine. The babe is a boy."
TV · Ninja_King_3834
a racist
The little child was no different from a normal child, but because he was born with blue eyes, he was constantly mistreated by adults and children alike, and it was a miracle that he was not killed. Even his parents and siblings did not want him because of this insignificant birth difference.
Transformers Prime: I am Allspark
Anime & Comics · PRIME_PRIMUS