Braderzsz

Braderzsz

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2020-04-30 Joined Global
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Braderzsz
Braderzsz
10 months ago
Replied to OP1000

Ah, thanks for the spot.

Braderzsz
Braderzsz
1 years ago
Replied to EmpathicWan

I understand where you are coming from and I do need to work on it. I guess I look at trying to make the fight more eventful, rather than, her being stronger means she easily takes people down, and things end quickly and easily (not that that is what you are saying either). In this instance, all I can say is that she only had a couple of days worth of training, which she hasn't had the time to constantly repeat and drill the things she learnt into her head. Additionally, her tail is still reforming, so it's not at its peak which hinders her a little as well and given the size of the room they are in, the Poleaxe just isn't feasible as a weapon to use. If she tries to swing it she's going to get it lodged into a beam or a barrel or something. Then there is the hulking beast of a man she is against. But, I understand your point, I shall have to think harder in regards to the next fight scene.

Braderzsz
Braderzsz
1 years ago
Replied to TheLord999

Is this still the case, as from my uploads, I can see part 1 so I'm not sure why is hasn't shown up for you.

Braderzsz
Braderzsz
1 years ago
Replied to Raven_Master

Well, she may look like a monster, but she doesn't have to act like one. Besides, blinding a man after capturing him while staying in a house you have been invited to stay in as a guest, might not go down well with some people.

"We don't have to answer questions from someone like you. Now, I think we should get you into the cells your bandit friends are in. Lyrika, can you go wake Yoban and let him know what happened? I'll watch over this guy."

The Only Good Orc is a Half-Orc

The Only Good Orc is a Half-Orc

Fantasy · Braderzsz

Braderzsz
Braderzsz
1 years ago
Replied to Raven_Master

Thanks for the spot. Ill correct that.

Braderzsz
Braderzsz
1 years ago
Replied to DC2911

For the time being at least. So far she has just been going with the flow, giving into the experiences that Lyrika has provided her. There is also the Orc and Goblin urge that is growing in her that's going to cause her to remain a little cautious as well. But, I'm sure it won't be long before the urge grows strong enough and she has the chance to truly go for it with one of the girls. It's possible it would have happened with Lyrika if they hadn't been stopped.

Braderzsz
Braderzsz
1 years ago
Replied to Caiow

Well, I think it's a culmination of all that she has learnt that caused her to go for it. It's not just the words of one man, a series of events and information she has learnt. Besides, she should be more than capable of handling herself should trouble occur, being a Mercenary and all.

Braderzsz
Braderzsz
1 years ago
Replied to charon413

It's still healing so there isn't much she has to hide, then its a case of doing like she did at the ball and bunching it up what remains as best as she can.

Braderzsz
Braderzsz
1 years ago
Replied to Princess_Devina

Thanks for spotting. I shall correct this.

Braderzsz
Braderzsz
1 years ago
Replied to Caiow

You never know. She still has quite the journey ahead.

Almost instantly the fire zipped across the mucus. It travelled insanely fast along the rope, disintegrating all of the hardened layers, leaving just the rope which had now started to burn. A short while later the log dropped to the floor, and Olivia then made sure to put out any remaining flames.

The Only Good Orc is a Half-Orc

The Only Good Orc is a Half-Orc

Fantasy · Braderzsz

  • The Only Good Orc is a Half-Orc original

    The Only Good Orc is a Half-Orc

    Fantasy R18 MAGIC TRANSMIGRATION ISEKAI YURI

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    Having found herself caught in a dispute between two goddesses, follow Olivia as she ends up being transmigrated to a strange new world called Khallasia as another species. This world contains many different races, from humans to elves and gnomes to beast-kin, along with monsters such as goblins and ogres. Starting anew in this world with no possessions, she will try to live her life in a world that vilifies the races that make up her species. Her journey will include having to learn to fight in a world where death is frequent, wars are brewing, and slavery, while illegal, is a common occurrence. She will face many foes, from wild animals to full-fledged monsters, as well as bandits and robbers to knights and adventures, while she tries to find a place to call home. With only her appearance changing, her mentality to do good deeds remains the same. Whether this can continue in this new and more violent world is another story, especially since the urges that plague her species will soon start to plague her. Warning: This is a harem, yuri novel where the MC is also a futanari. If you don’t like it, then don’t read. This will include a romance between the MC and the harem members. Romantic R18 scenes, all of which will be consensual, will occur in the story between the MC and her harem members. This is the second novel I am writing, and I hope to improve as I go. There will also be mentions of topics such as torture, rape, slavery, and possibly others, but nothing graphic shall be shown. Foul language will be present and now uncensored. I do not own the image/s in the thumbnail and if the owner/s would like me to take it down, please let me know.

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  • A Lamia's Tale original

    A Lamia's Tale

    Fantasy R18 MAGIC TRANSMIGRATION ISEKAI NONHUMAN YURI

    In the strange world of Thalassia, having been transported from her old one, follow the adventures of Octavia as she comes to terms with her transformation and the new world she finds herself in. She will have to deal with the drastic change, going from late nights studying, watching films and chatting with college friends to exploring a world where magic is common place, kingdoms exist and the wilderness contains many bandits and dangerous creatures. Different races reside across the globe, including beast folk, humans, elves and many others all facing different struggles in their daily life. Starting from next to nothing, lacking in knowledge, she will face a long road where she will learn about her race, face many problems, help people across the world and deal with a plot against the goddess that saved her life. Join her as the meets many different people, good and bad, becoming enemies with some and friends with others. This is my first story I am writing, and I hope to improve as I go. This is likely to be a light hearted yuri story, which may include yuri romance further down the line, depending on how things go. I hope you enjoy it and please give your feedback on improvements to my writing. If you don’t like, then don’t read. I do not own the image/s in the thumbnail, which I have added to and if the owner/s would like me to take it down, please let me know.

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