... and rightly thought ( I ) would have... Probably should be: ... and rightly thought (she) would have...
"With your permission, Mistress," Becky began, and I nodded. "I hoped that you would do me like last time till I." Becky blushed, "Till I passed out temporarily." Becky finished, and I knew that she wanted to say something about my loud belch but thought more on it and rightly thought I would have got punished for it.
Urban · Madjic
I told her, and frankly, I couldn't really blame her. Crystal was hot, and so was (Crystal). The last Crystal, should have been (Becky).
"Okay," Crystal sat up and slowly got up her rectum squeezing me the entire way up my shaft. Crystal lovingly moaned as she finally stood up, and I swore I heard a pop as my cock left her ass. "God, I can feel your semen slowly dripping down inside me. You filled me up again; Maybe you should get some type of Cumdump in the future?" Crystal said, her tone sounding questioning as Becky flushed.
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and so was (Crystal). Should be: and so was (Backy).
"Okay," Crystal sat up and slowly got up her rectum squeezing me the entire way up my shaft. Crystal lovingly moaned as she finally stood up, and I swore I heard a pop as my cock left her ass. "God, I can feel your semen slowly dripping down inside me. You filled me up again; Maybe you should get some type of Cumdump in the future?" Crystal said, her tone sounding questioning as Becky flushed.
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Becky pressed her breasts against me as her (stories) turned... Should be: Becky pressed her breasts against me as her (strokes) turned...
Becky pressed her breasts against me as her stories turned long instead of fast now. "With that style and Angela's more tomboy and fit body from her abdominal muscles, I was thinking of making her a more tomboy set up than anything girlish. In fact," Becky said seriously as her hand slid up and down my cock, "I think anything that would be considered girlish should be kept away with a thousand-foot pole. Except I think you should pack some things in a closet room that might be regarded as girlish for male customers that you want to humiliate. Or even female customers, it doesn't matter at this point. I think some roleplay with Angela could be a special of hers if you get enough outfits for her."
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Hilda moaned as I (trusted) into her throat... Should be: Hilda moaned as I (thrust /thrusted) into her throat...
Hilda moaned as I trusted into her throat, and she pulled back her head, and her hands stroked the shaft of my cock as her head buried itself into my balls. Pleasure resonated through my cock as Hilda did her best to pleasure me. I moaned loudly, reaching the edge as Hilda did her best to pleasure me, sucking on my testicles. Hilda didn't seem to want to spend too much time on my balls this time as she pulled back and took the length of my now fully hard cock in her throat again. Her head bobbed, and I began to fuck her throat all over again.
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I (sound) my girlfriend ... Should be: I(found) my girlfriend
By the end, I was positively soaking in my own sweat with deep sweat marks all over my outfit. It was refreshing as I cooled down and walked off the last bit of the disorientation from running on a treadmill. I felt alive, and my heart was pumping, and a smile painted my face. I couldn't help it. I felt great, and a few minutes later, as I walked it off, I sound my girlfriend on a machine doing some crunches. I couldn't help but smile, and I started to approach, but Crystal got up first finished her set before I arrived.
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... grabbed him suddenly by the (air). Should be: ... grabbed him suddenly by the (hair).
I lost track of time as I put my cum dump into various positions and released more seed into her. I didn't find myself back in control until I looked over her, leaking a large amount of semen dripping from her pussy. Becky's hair was a mess, and she was on her back. Her legs were spread out in a mess on the bed.
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"Oh, Little sissy (made) I have a mess for you !" Should be: " Oh, Little sissy (maid) I have a mess for you !"
I lost track of time as I put my cum dump into various positions and released more seed into her. I didn't find myself back in control until I looked over her, leaking a large amount of semen dripping from her pussy. Becky's hair was a mess, and she was on her back. Her legs were spread out in a mess on the bed.
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Punctuation marks in wrong spots. My mother turned her breasts ( , ) now visible to me. Should be: My mother turned ( , ) her breasts now visible to me.
I smirked, and I stepped into the pool and enjoyed myself. The rocks were smooth, and they massaged my feet as I walked over them. I was starting to get hungry, though, after some time. I was getting restless, and I stood up and left towards the elevator to head back up to the pool. I didn't see Grace on my way up, and I waited and exited at the top.
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Becky begged and continued slowly teasing her. Probably should be: Becky begged and ( I ) continued slowly teasing her.
"Please, MIstress, It feels so good. I want your cock inside me!" Becky begged and continued slowly teasing her. My hand moved as Becky tilted her head away from me as I licked up her neck again. Her moan sounded loudly in the room, and my hand reached her nipple, pinching it lightly in my fingers.
Life of a Dominant Futanari
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