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stoneclauss
3 months ago
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the reading comprehension of these past 2 chapters is so low. its been stated again and again that zax is not a fan of his classmates and all his reasons for it. not only that but he was antagonised first by tairo "what's with you" is the most passive aggressive way of saying you're acting like a freak, insulted the dog that was his only friend in that class and then attempted to make him feel inferior to his sister. from the structure of the schooling system it's damn clear that they've been classmates for years, and that he preferred to just be left alone and stick to himself. for all those saying he's rude, he isn't to his sister which clearly says something. did he overreact in his dealing out of punishment to those girls, sure. but they had killed an old and scared dog brutally. zax did not handle the situation well but as a 12 year old how well do you expect him to deal with this. his home life is a wreck and the only thing that qualifies as a parental figure to him is his sister who is still a child herself

stoneclauss
stoneclauss
4 months ago
Commented

wouldn't it be possible to update his official quirk (like izuku did when he received OFA) to something like a body manipulation quirk. that way it would explain his shape-shifting, his glasses, his ability to make weapons from himself and even at a stretch say the side effect of his quirk was an enhanced body. this way he won't ever get heat for using a "unregistered" ability while still being able to not show off the full extent of his abilities by stating some of them are of the non lethal category

stoneclauss
stoneclauss
9 months ago
Replied to Desire96

yes I know. I stated that Lee had talent. but once again Lee wasn't strong enough to have an important role in the war because he didn't manage to attain 8th gate. and unfortunately, takuma isn't as talented in taijutsu as Lee is, so going down that avenue isn't really feasible if he wants to become strong enough to survive

He thought about ways to get more powerful on his own, using his esoteric knowledge about this world to his advantage— but nothing seemed viable to him. He could snatch a Sharingan or Byakugan, but that would get him killed immediately. He could steal the Forbidden Scroll of Seals stored at the Hokage's Residence like Naruto did— but the chances of getting court-martialled were inevitable. Every scenario he thought ended up in a dead-end.

Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader

stoneclauss
stoneclauss
1 years ago
Replied to gaurav_Kumar_1424

it was more of a rank thing that his position got taken, it became too large of an operation for a genin (despite how skilled takuma is) to handle. if he had been chuunin he might have been able to fight more for the position as that is considered a leadership rank. not only that but takuma is not an Uchiha, and the police force Is owned by it, as such now that its grown from takumas hard work the uchiha will take it and essentially reap the rewards. I believe takuma kept his name out of the papers for notoriety reasons, he didn't want his name to become well known and for people to start hunting him down, which could be both smart and dumb. smart because takuma is connected to drug trade and if people ever figure out his identity both his drug trading position and police force/ shinobi career is ruined, it has negative repercussions in the sense that because he kept the bad attention off him, he also kept the good attention off him too and thus only became well known in his department

stoneclauss
stoneclauss
1 years ago
Replied to ZaP_Tempest

that would be sick actually. like the humming blade

stoneclauss
stoneclauss
1 years ago
Commented

don't listen to the hate comments on takuma author, a lot of people are here for a quick weak to strong op af character when in actuality this is extremely impressive progression. he started years late and he's already taking on high level chuunin (granted in a group but he 1v1 him when the opportunity arose) and 4 root agents among many other impressive feats. he's had such little time compared to everyone else but he's now head and shoulders above his peers. his growth is well within the realms of a well written hard working prodigy and if he had been given more time (say from the age of 3) he would well be on the level of geniuses

stoneclauss
stoneclauss
1 years ago
Replied to MAO_Miaomiao

the dude just took on and essentially won against 4 root trained against (with 10 years of training) when he has been in this world for like 2 or 3. if you think about it his growth rate and survivability and adaptability Is astounding

stoneclauss
stoneclauss
1 years ago
Commented

this is such an awesome novel the pacing is slow but it's realistic and Incredibly well built. takuma came into this world with no cheats hacks wishes systems and hardly any time before canon events take place. it's so amazing to see the progress he's made

stoneclauss
stoneclauss
1 years ago
Replied to Madao420

energy doesn't have a direction, it just exists within a system. energy limits what is possible within a system. as energy doesn't have a direction and only a magnitude, it is a scalar not a vector

Vector Manipulation, an ability that sounds like a bug, allows one to freely manipulate the direction of all types of energy, including kinetic, thermal, and electrical energy, just by touching them.

My Hero Career is Seemingly Quite Difficult

My Hero Career is Seemingly Quite Difficult

Anime & Comics · VALRRR

stoneclauss
stoneclauss
1 years ago
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there is no direction to energy it exists I a system, that's it

Vector Manipulation, an ability that sounds like a bug, allows one to freely manipulate the direction of all types of energy, including kinetic, thermal, and electrical energy, just by touching them.

My Hero Career is Seemingly Quite Difficult

My Hero Career is Seemingly Quite Difficult

Anime & Comics · VALRRR

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