David_Jenkins_5439

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David_Jenkins_5439
David_Jenkins_5439
2 months ago
Posted

Love your other works. This looking good so far. Interesting concept looking forward to see where this goes.The rest is filler àaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

David_Jenkins_5439
David_Jenkins_5439
8 months ago
Commented

Love.the.chapter but what is gouging on with look like the rough draft being in closed its confusing me as to what tis going on

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David_Jenkins_5439
David_Jenkins_5439
9 months ago
Commented

Also what about tech gifted to humans like asgard beaming tech from stargate. Or tech reversed engineered like the crystal computers from the gould

David_Jenkins_5439
David_Jenkins_5439
9 months ago
Commented

What about tech from the star gate tv series? Some of the the advanced races were human like the tollans. You could even call the ancients human too since technically they are a precusere to the modern humans and even Inter breed ed with them.

David_Jenkins_5439
David_Jenkins_5439
9 months ago
Commented

Natasha cause the others come with tom much baggage and the baggage Natasha comes with can be dealt with money and upgrades

David_Jenkins_5439
David_Jenkins_5439
1 years ago
Commented

have you considered that this could easily turn into harry causing the system apocalypse 😕

David_Jenkins_5439
David_Jenkins_5439
1 years ago
Commented

Doctor who quote for the win with the trap speech at the end

David_Jenkins_5439
David_Jenkins_5439
1 years ago
Commented

Sound to me that harry remade the colt from the tv show supernatural. Too cool next up a lightsaber

David_Jenkins_5439
David_Jenkins_5439
2 years ago
Posted

Love the story keep up the good work. Wish it was updated more often but ill take what I can get. Great character development you perfectly pulled of the overlooked but lazy and bored main character

David_Jenkins_5439
David_Jenkins_5439
3 years ago
Commented

On was there some kind of time skip that I missed. One moment there are training the new member next it s the fight with the 7swordsman and cut with no explanation what did I miss?