succubus is such a well written statement, so much intent with that one word.
"That succubus has you wrapped around her pretty little finger…"
Sci-fi · Zentmeister
Make the most boring bland system kingdom builder you can think of. This is it just with fake reviews and translation done by bing.All inconsistencies and mistakes have been pointed out by comments none have been fixed. How this novel is trending is honestly a complete mystery to me.I understand that there is some work put into this and on the off chance I'm wrong and there's a slight amount of care put into the translation, I apologize.
This book has been deleted.
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UNFORTUNATELY, I had to delete my 'hardest game ever' folder, more than 2 terabytes of videos were deleted, I cried blood when I hit the 'delete' key on my computer, but it's all for the greater good.
Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
Right from the start it's was lightly implied that the only one to survive would be Kim. With Sunny saying the cohort would be built around her dispute her average combat ability because of her high synergy with Sunny himself. (or words to that effect). No other member works well directly with Sunny, as long as sunny has Kim he has a reformible cohort.The ironic part of this is Lusters selfless sacrifice means he gets out with his life. which is more than can be said about the other 4 expendables. Although the healer is only missing presumed dead.
After the Winter Beast left, he had returned to collect the bodies of Belle, Dorn, and Samara.
Fantasy · Guiltythree
have a girl attempt to stop MC from going outside in extremely elaborate ways as the outside is dangerous. It should be fun if the schemes are crazy enough that the MC has a bit of trouble weaving his way though the mess if an overprotective yandere.
This chapter has been deleted.
Fantasy · Lord_Sadness
Honestly I'm in agreement with a few people here 5 should be a decent number to go for with 6 as a maximum. Your chapter lengths will mean any more won't really be possible without having a girl not written about for weeks on end. Which in turn will mean personiltys will drift by accident lowing story consistency.
ch 28 Important question
Fantasy · Lord_Sadness
Fun fact this trap was common in WW2 after Dday. But it was piano wire at head hight while driving. It was such a big problem that all jeeps were modified to counter this threat.
A bloodbath. One by one as pieces of the zombies corpses began to go past Gray, painting both him and the walls as they passed through the thin line he had created.
Fantasy · Renovator
Famous for there space to energy ratio. Truly the greatest survival food.
After that, he rushed through the store grabbing any supply he deemed necessary. Packet of chips and beans, corn, grains, onions, any ingredients which hadn't expired.
Fantasy · Renovator
What a line
"Because my heart is filled up by Junior Brother." Xiao Yu looked at Jiang Lan as she spoke.
Eastern · Red Pepper Afraid Of Spicy
Minor typo mistake here author senpai. Can I win him? Should be; Can I beat him? Or can I win against him?
"When the time comes, I wonder how strong he is. Both of us will be at the Dao Immortal Realm then. Can I win him?"
Eastern · Red Pepper Afraid Of Spicy
This one confused me for a bit felt like a translation error. But thinking about it it, its probably a reference to the fact its common for dragons to be born as immortals and therefor as adults in there race. While the dragon waifu was born weak and thus a toddler.
When she was born, she was still a toddler.
Eastern · Red Pepper Afraid Of Spicy
I hate these cheap nicknames they just confuse me. Even more so when 5 are introduced at once.
ch 321 Claiming Her Impregnation Reward • • • • •
Fantasy · Daoist_Little_Yun
Playing flag master like a champ
"I mean, I'll protect Senior Sister's smile."
Eastern · Red Pepper Afraid Of Spicy
What else did she see? in one of those futures she must have learnt the corruption
Which meant that she had known what would happen all along.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree