The first time she appeared, his first thought was to kill her for possibly being a threat to the Drummonds. It was clearly over the top on his part (overprotective), so he regretted thinking about killing her without even knowing her, and tried to give her a chance... well, he's not in love with her, but he also wants to be "good" for her.
"Eliza?!" Arthur hears her scream and immediately grows concerned, but he doesn't take his eyes off Marcus, not daring to turn his back on his enemy.
Fantasy · LamenThief
but a little arrogance isn't so bad either, right? he's trying
soon I think
I don't control the cost of chapters, it's based on the word count of each chapter. So if you pay twice as many coins for a chapter, that means it's twice as long, so how can it be unfair?
I did a proportional time inversion to give mystery and a POV of Arthur's enemies in Silas' first appearance, but then I went back in time using the phrase "half an hour ago" and explained how it got to that point.
You're right, I exaggerated. But I was probably getting a lot of that same criticism back then, readers want characters to be perfect when their flaws are part of the personality. sorry for my rant
"So I showed him that the world is not black and white but gray, that there is both light and shadows within all of us, and what defines whether we are good or not is not any sense of morality or ethics but the people for whom we choose to do good or evil."
Fantasy · LamenThief
ops, my bad
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Fantasy · LamenThief
arrogance, affects even the best haha
"Too late." Another voice speaks from behind Silas, and the giant is shocked that he hadn't sensed the enemy approaching.
Fantasy · LamenThief
This was a little time skip to add mystery, but I'll revisit the scene and explain how it got to that point.
<3
THE PRINCE'S SERVANT
LGBT+ · Kiwikun