Don't worry, I was like that too, I'm still on several times. But I do a little change even it is just little positive thing every day. You might want to do same like me, so maybe we won't get much regret in the future.
"Well, fuck who feels unhappy for you. There is always someone or a group who hates you, but fuck them. We only live for a moment in this world. If you don't enjoy every second of what you have, then you are the stupidest person alive."
To the Depth of Abyss
Fantasy · Chad_Farmer
Hello, with the upcoming daily of book recommended, and if u r new reader reading this, I want to say there r grammar error and unsatisfactory words in the first 50 chapter. I will try to fix all of them, but if you can still see them, that mean I'm not done fixed them yet. Thats cuz I'm in my last semester and so busy with college, writing already hard for me as I'm still learning my english With that, I hope you can help me to point out if you find any grammar error or unsatisfactory words. Please dont tell me to hire an editor, I'm poor af, but I'll do my best to make this story well so you will follow till we reach the depth of Abyss
Hi, thanks for the gift. Really appreciate it
Evolved Father Tree is a temporary name. But very much thanks with the suggestion
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To the Depth of Abyss
Fantasy · Chad_Farmer
I didn't really pay attention to grammar in the early chapters, but I will check it after this, thanks for the feedback,
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original To the Depth of Abyss
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It is said, if you can enter the deepest place in Abyssal Terra, any wish can be granted. Arsen is not a young man who wants his wish to be granted, he is just a weak young man who is forced to make money on Abyssal Terra. In an exploration, he met a dragon, Fafnir. Fafnir is one of the participants in Abyssal Terra. Because he did not accept being forced to become a participant, Fafnir used Arsen and gave Arsen a cheat as a [VIP Player]. With a cheat and a desire to prove the truth of Abyssal Terra, Ars began his fight to go to the deepest place in that hell.262 Chs 2.6k Collections
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From Zero to Five Star
"Do you wish for power?" Rio, a Zero Star, received an offer from The Devil. The offer gave him the strength to fight against Arcdemon, the monster that terrorized humanity. But there is one condition to get its strength, that there must be sacrifices that must be made. A world where the human-representative Knights, Aditya, and monsters from other dimensions, Arcdemon, fought to fight over the earth. Rio Nugraha must be the strongest without having to rely on Devil's power.27 Chs 36 Collections
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From Zero to Five Star (Indonesia)
“Apa kau menginginkan kekuatan?” Rio yang seorang Zero Star menerima tawaran dari The Devil. Tawaran itu memberikannya kekuatan untuk bertarung melawan Arcdemon, monster yang meneror umat manusia. Tapi ada satu syarat untuk mendapatkan kekuatannya, yaitu harus ada pengorbanan yang harus dilakukan. Dunia dimana Ksatria perwakilan manusia, Aditya, dan monster dari dimensi lain, Arcdemon, bertarung untuk memperebutkan bumi. Rio Nugraha harus menjadi yang terkuat tanpa harus mengandalkan kekuatan Devil untuk mengakhiri penderitaan umat manusia.10 Chs 5 Collections
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Cinderella Girl and Peter Pan Boy
Eruin adalah gadis pengidap sindrom Cinderella yang membuatnya menjadi pribadi yang sangat manja dan tidak mau mandiri. Hal itu terjadi karena ayahnya terlalu memanjakannya sejak kecil. Ayahnya yang tak ingin anaknya untuk tumbuh tua seperti itu mengirim Eruin ke desa dekat dengan pegunungan. Membuatnya menghabiskan tiga tahun masa SMA di desa itu. Saat berpindah sekolah, Eruin bertemu dengan pemuda pengidap sindrom Peterpan. Pemuda yang masih bersikap seperti anak-anak di usianya yang sudah menginjak lima belas. “Bagas! Kamu harus jadi pangeranku!” “Enak aja! Kau yang harusnya jadi peri kecilku!” Dua insan itu bertemu dan melukiskan kisah cinta mereka semasa SMA yang dipenuhi dengan berbagai macam warna1 Chs 3 Collections
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One of the people in the Party is Arsen. The young man dropped the bag full of luggage. The bag that Arsen brought could even explode if not given more ties.
To the Depth of Abyss
Fantasy · Chad_Farmer