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2yr
Commented Hey author, a lot of mistakes i see in novels on this platform, grammatically speaking, is the double use of words lie that and had. In reality you only need to use it once, not only does it help the flow of sentences but it's just easier to read too.
Marla could tell from his confident demeanor that that was his plan but it hardly mattered.
Rise of the Cosmic_Emperor
Eastern · Nate_Quinn
First the concept of the story is truly a breath of fresh air, but I do not know how the story has such an overall good rating. Yes, it's decent,but the writing quality is poor at best. There are a lot of gaps in the wording that just plain don't make sense. It also is obvious that the author isn't native English speaker because the translation is shoddy. Don't trust all the reviews they're just heeping praise with no criticism to help the author fix the mistakes which shows they're probably mostly paid reviews. Some may not but I'm not multilingual so I don't understand most of the reviews.
WHEN I CANT SEE! ( VERS ENG)
Urban · Ayu_Kristin