wait, did Eli revived? isn't he dead?
ch 32 Chapter 32(The truth part 1)
Fantasy · Evertruth727_
When the mc is a chinese who was know to eat all kind of animal is disgusted to eat creature to become strong. Note: No racism intended, just saying the popular opinion on them
ch 0 2 Increase in Food and Evolution Points
Urban · Gaze Through the Winter Water
This is what you called degression of plot, forcing a certain situation and decision just to make it more interesting, which usually have an opposite effect. This will give the reader a bad experience at reading and usually drops it after a couple more chapter. You actually have an amazing start, like it was interesting, thinking this is probably a gold, but wait, its just a fools gold.
ch 0 3 Choice of reincarnation
Fantasy · Prazal
No emotional breakdown? no depression? he just think it as a dream after 100 or so? His mentality is not from someone who submitted to reality before but a mentality of your average xianxia protagonist.
ch 0 2 Scorpion avoiding step
Eastern · Pinky_chan
hmmm, I can accept the sudden growth but i how can he kill a goblin when he is only a cat? much less a juvenile cat... This is breaking the immersion of the story making things for the readers to relate. I know you wanted the mc to interact with the other character(s) so you can progress with your plot, but please don't look it too forced... still i like it and continue reading.
ch 0 4 Goblins and the girl 2
Fantasy · Steven_Andy
story is good, I won't comment whatsoever on its content, but why put a spoiler in the sypnosis? It's a retarded move. Just plain stupid. Just don't do it next time
Reincarnated As The Strongest Ancestor With a System
Eastern · Dark_Crow1111