Is this one of the girls talking as it sounds or Dravyn since it says "I said" like it's his part?
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Fantasy · SilentWalker_2100
Ok... how big is this hole if it's taking minutes to climb in and out of but also able to reach her arms and legs from outside it? And how is she not dead if she only has minutes left and they just took minutes to crawl out of the hole?
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Fantasy · SilentWalker_2100
Darkness is still at 69% he might have to make all the elements hit 80% and create a domain using all the elements essentially making a whole world that's under his rule.
He had wanted to level up before the military began; however, no matter how much he tried to increase his connection with the molecules and become one with them, it wouldn't budge. Every one had stopped at the 80% mark as though he was missing something.
Fantasy · RealmWeaver
Always happy to help and i look forward to reaching the corrected chapters soon and seeing which direction this story takes. 😁🐺
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Fantasy · SilentWalker_2100
Is it really necessary to have the overview description of what he's thinking as well as him thinking it and planning it out loud? It just seems redundant.
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Fantasy · SilentWalker_2100
Where is his pet and when is it going to hatch?
In one of their branches, the Silent Nexus had used a beast pet shop as a cover to mask their operations. The shop was filled with different people who had come to adopt pets.
Fantasy · RealmWeaver
Always happy to help a good story stay on track
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Fantasy · SilentWalker_2100
Didn't he just have his 8th birthday?
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Fantasy · SilentWalker_2100
It's a story told with words in sentences forming paragraphs on pages divided into chapters... it's a book wether it's on actual pages or virtual pages lol. Yes it's a web novel which is a light novel on the web. A light novel is a book... skill issue? I think you have an educational issue if you can't figure that out.
I wanted to take a moment to address a narrative shift that you'll notice from this chapter through to the 20th. During this period, Atticus will make only occasional appearances. This part plays a pivotal role in shaping the story's development.
Fantasy · RealmWeaver
He didn't say anything about your past. He simply asked if you wanted to see your family again. Both are reincarnated and know it so it's not a stretch to think of using ones past family as a trigger.
"Wait a second… How do you even know about my past!?"
Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground
Fantasy · RealmWeaver