Bootquake

male LV 15

Just an average person, yo.

2020-01-31 Joined Germany
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Bootquake
Bootquake
1 years ago
Commented

Grammar can be strange, especially tenses. Still prefer it to be correct tho, so good job ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

As they finished and headed home, Caspian felt like this was the best day he had had in his life. He felt calm and refreshed, and he ended the night with a big smile. Caspian didn't notice it, but Abby felt the same. (A/N: It says "had had" is the correct grammar, so why not? xD)

Condemned Hymn: Avatar of Sin

Condemned Hymn: Avatar of Sin

Fantasy · Omniverse_Creator

Bootquake
Bootquake
1 years ago
Commented

Good.

As the loyal fan of Chubbyemu, Tyler did come up with a method of poisoning that can circumvent the appraisal ability, and that is: "Combination Poisoning." 

Confess System: Picking Up Girls After Girls, Try Not to Get Killed!

Confess System: Picking Up Girls After Girls, Try Not to Get Killed!

Fantasy · POWER_

Bootquake
Bootquake
1 years ago
Commented

Ha! Knew it.

[1]: So yeah, I am honest. I saw this idea from Toaru. When I was searching for how to use electromagnetism. Basically, my biggest inspirations are Misaka and Magneto and the Kazekage in Naruto. But I honestly don't really know how iron sand work. I could just bullshit but I still at least wanna have some explanation you know. So if someone can explain to me how Misaka Mikoto does it. Also how strong would a weapon made of iron sand really be?

God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss

God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss

Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI

Bootquake
Bootquake
1 years ago
Commented

Can't talk without lungs pushing air past your vocal cords. But he could have mouthed it instead.

His brain and nerves, still functioning, allowed him to utter his last two words.

Confess System: Picking Up Girls After Girls, Try Not to Get Killed!

Confess System: Picking Up Girls After Girls, Try Not to Get Killed!

Fantasy · POWER_

Bootquake
Bootquake
1 years ago
Commented

Really enjoying the story so far! [img=update]

Bootquake
Bootquake
1 years ago
Commented

I liked the presentation of the training the way it was done. Not something I've seen very often.

Bootquake
Bootquake
1 years ago
Commented

...bruh.

Violet remained silent until she made up her mind, as she opened her mouth and said...

My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.

My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.

Fantasy · Victor_Weismann

Bootquake
Bootquake
2 years ago
Posted

Very interesting start. I would also like to see this continued!

Bootquake
Bootquake
2 years ago
Commented

+1

I do apologize for the slow update, I am trying to put up quality as opposed to quantity. Kindly put in a +1 if you think this was worth the wait.

Harem Tournament of Champions

Harem Tournament of Champions

Fantasy · Triad_lust

Bootquake
Bootquake
2 years ago
Commented

+1

I had been having some thoughts on this story and wasn't so sure if I should continue with this so... I would love to know if you've read it thus far by making an inline comment on this paragraph with a +1.

Harem Tournament of Champions

Harem Tournament of Champions

Fantasy · Triad_lust