I don’t think the time period he’s born in works according to the timeline I found in Inoichi, Yamanaka was born in year 40 which means if the main character is born in year 54 his father would be 14
I vote for icebreaker for the weapons name. Stormbreaker was named because of the connection between lightning and storms so this one should be named for his connection to ice and its function.
I would like it if you added another world to this one I’d say the original charmed would fit well with twilight I don’t remember when the original charmed takes place so you might have to modify the timeline to fit them together, but other than that, I think they both would complement each other after the events of twilight the main character and Rosalie could move to San Francisco and interact with the charmed ones you could possibly even make one of the charmed ones his second girlfriend, I would also suggest the supernatural TV show. If it weren’t for the fact that you said earlier, there were no cosmic beings in the New World the main character was placed in
People are gonna hate for no reason on anything and everything when they do that it’s best to do your best to ignore it. This is a good story. I very much enjoyed it and hope to continue enjoying it although I would like it if you mixed fast and furious with it, I want the main character to do some street racing and becoming friends with Dom especially since they started in the same city at least I think Dom grew up there
Skyrim and danmachi have a good variety of beings to scan while cyberpunk could give him a new type of tech to work on a new Knowledge to learn about like just imagine if he learned how to make stuff to make and view BD’s he could turn his show into BDS and revolutionize the entertainment industry, and even video games
Why not send him to cyberpunk? Or danmachi or Skyrim
I don’t know if you thought of it and I know Diane Smith is erased in infinity, but it doesn’t seem to include time and if she wasn’t erased from time, that means the main character could go back in time and either take her from the past or get her DNA to clone her either way she could be added to the harem having Diane Beth and Summer maybe even get a version for Rick the reason I don’t think she was erased from time is because if she was, Beth would not be able to exist when someone is erased from time everything they’ve done or achieved is erased as well and since Beth is Diane’s daughter, Beth would’ve had to been erased as well so I think this is completely feasible
I think it’s a good idea for him to steal the boosted gear and I think a person could probably hold two sacred gears in their soul depending on how powerful they are but I don’t think he should get absorption line everything that gear can do he can enchant an item with the abilities of Besides, it wouldn’t be nice to steal him from Sona. After all, she has no reason to reincarnate him if he doesn’t have his sacred gear issei on the other hand, since the main characters most likely gonna be reincarnated by rias gremory stealing issei’s sacred gear wouldn’t be as big a deal since he would be replacing Issei
Plus, he could get the weapons gremlin, Rebecca and the net runner Lucy as companions i’m sure Lucy would want to leave with him because she wants to leave the planet and arasaka and I think Rebecca would want to go because of all the weapons she could get the things she could blow up and people she could fight
I’m really sorry when I first started reading this I liked it a lot. I thought it was one of the best. If not the best transformer prime fanfiction I had ever read, but when you started making chapters about the history of Cybertron, I was just like well it’s not my thing but it’s probably only gonna be a few chapters long so I read them even if I wasn’t interested in Cybertron history, but then you continued writing about Cybertron and I continued reading for as long as I could until I just couldn’t stand reading about Cybertron anymore then I started just skipping chapters thinking well it’s over already been five chapters. He’ll probably be done with this part soon and I can get back to the good story only you haven’t gone back to the story I enjoyed and I just can’t ignore it anymore. I can’t say about other readers but personally, I don’t care about Cybertron history. I cared about what you were writing before and I wouldn’t have minded if it was just like five maybe 10 chapters but it’s been much more than that either way. I think this is it for me. I enjoyed it for a bit but ever since you started the Cybertron chapters. I’ve just kind of lost interest cause it no longer feels like the story. I enjoyed no more feels like a transformers prime fanfiction I hope you find readers that enjoy this but I personally just can’t read anymore. Sorry I’m removing this from my library, I hope you have a great day.
Transformers Prime: I am Allspark
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