ChrisJ56

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loner, keep to my self

2019-12-04 Joined United States
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ChrisJ56
3 years ago
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You need to separate the words in the novel into three things, speaking, thoughts, and description Need more Need more explanations, than just talk to me when you can.

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ChrisJ56
3 years ago
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Good idea with the word counts, and, though, the system interface still needs a little work in my opinion, it's starting to get better, keep increasing your word count, and good luck on the novel

ChrisJ56
ChrisJ56
3 years ago
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Some miss spellings, but not bad at all

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ChrisJ56
3 years ago
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This novel has lots of potential, keep up the good work

ChrisJ56
ChrisJ56
3 years ago
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When will he start learning his magic, he dose have dark magic, right?

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  • Frankenstine the New Beginning original

    Frankenstine the New Beginning

    Sci-fi

    This a story of a boy, he was normal kid with a normal life. Until that day when everything he had and knew was gone. After losing everything he cared about, he was put in an orphanage. A week after that, he put on a table and blacked outed. When he woke up he was outside where he narrowly escaped from the garbage incinerator he was in. After a few years of living on the streets, he was saved by a man who helped him, gave him a life and a purpose again. Many years later, that boy made a life of his own that was living peacefull and calm. Until one day, he was given an opportunity that would change his life again. After completing the task of his that he was asked to do, he left with a sense of achievement for what he has done. After leaving, he went back to his normal life as if nothing happened. But just when he thought he when back to his normal life again, the people who hired him wanted to make sure he never talked about what happened. After surviving against almost a a few dozen armed soldiers and the government assassins, he tries to figure out who he is, and what happened to him when he was at the orphanage when he blacked out. And as he dose that, he slowly figures out who he is, while also being hunted down by those who wants him dead.

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