Daoist400972

Now that I think of have you ever heard of Scribblehub before, you could have a lot of potential there

At least now you’re more chill about your timing than before gotta make sure you’re not overwhelmed about doing lots of novels at the same time

Thanks for answering partner

Not talking about your writing it’s entertaining and fun but you need to menage your time more correctly on some works

Not to criticize your work or something but at least manage your writing between your novels sometimes they don’t even get endings and just stay incomplete,and one more thing you really need to work on a few work at a time like two or three but you are working on four to five right now,have more quality on the few the rest you can do them later after you finish the older ones

Man I could say that you just abandoned this novel because it’s not as popular like your other novels , I could wait five months for you to pick up again but it’s already becoming a year now

Good work

It should have more world building and more common sense knowledge and religious influences over the population

Simple and good

Focus more on the story details like real life situations and keep a solid story that makes sense such as connections between the characters and their environment,one more detail try not to lack common sense and make sure the grammar is ok. For more questions and details try reading other stories like yours and have more reference,also theres some really good sites with these kinds of online novels like Scr*bbleh*b and Roy*ro*d, that’s all Ican give you for now, I really have good expectations about your novel so good luck on your journey.