He's a [Locked: Lesser Venomous Cliff Hugger - 50 Soul - Organ Requirements Met] With a special retention of the Cliff Hugger Maw [Devouring]
[Morphology: Lesser Venomous Devouring Cliff Wraith]
The Lowest Demon of Hell
Horror · Caine_Stark
I can promise that he will grow. It will just... be different in a few notable ways.
That was the Shrieking Cliff Hugger? I had committed myself to the idea that other evolution paths would have similar power. Unprepared, I had no understanding for how the same seed had branched off in such ways. A variant, like myself. I was sure of it, given its title and stature. Even so the difference in raw strength was immense.
The Lowest Demon of Hell
Horror · Caine_Stark
I got -very- sick in May, multiple hosp[ital visits since then and all the blood they can drain for bloodwork. I'm doing much better, so I'm doing a full audit of all the existing chapters for continuity and errors (about 5 chapters a day). I've also turned down my WN contract. Another site has given me a much more flexible monetization option which I will take advantage of. I've got an outline prepared for ~1500 chapters in 30 chapter arcs. I do hope to get back into a chapter a day rhythm, health and kids just had to come first.
The author has a really strong narrative voice that translates well to the stream of consciousness from the main character bringing us into his world, even as he is taken away from it. Lots of potential!
The author is putting a lot of work into improving and it shows with each revision. I'm looking forward to the story blossoming out in future chapters.
Strong Female lead and well written paragraphs pull you into a glamorous world and all it's dirty details. I highly recommend for anyone looking for meat on the bones of their story with a strong narrative voice and compelling characters.
The first few chapters almost lost me with a very deep setup to the new sci-fi world of the stories setting but as soon as action breaks out by the third chapter the plot soars along. The author is steadily improving and I look forward to this stories growth!
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Great modern take on a system novel, with a sci-fi twist making it feel less magical and more sufficiently advanced technology. Looking forward to more chapters. this one's a winner.
Thanks ^^ It's good to be writing again.
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original The Lowest Demon of Hell
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(Indefinite hiatus due to rewrite) Awaken in hell as the shocking horror of the fall of Abel unfolds. Having lost his mortal life Abel reincarnates in hell, not as a human soul but as a rising demon! Using the power of Hell's profane system, Abel will descend to depths he never reached as a man. Progress through the body horror of the demon world, one evolution at a time, while exploring the trauma of a life cut short. Sometimes, there are things you should forget.22 Chs 919 Collections
His curse is different :) But he will lean heavier into the Organ System.
This giant variant hugger... was it Big Guy?
The Lowest Demon of Hell
Horror · Caine_Stark