Richie520

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Richie520
Richie520
1 years ago
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Here's my initial review: 1. The story is indeed a slow burn 2. The summary is very intriguing 3. Explanation and world building is to top point 4. The writing seemed realistic 5. Writing flow seemed consistent and easy to understand 6. Plot development is also good 7. Character design is well done Overall, It's a highly recommended book

Richie520
Richie520
1 years ago
Commented

the chapter seemed short for me!!! But it's ok.

Richie520
Richie520
1 years ago
Commented

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The Devil's Entice

The Devil's Entice

Fantasy · Joshan_Jo

Richie520
Richie520
1 years ago
Commented

is heroine a dimwit!!! I mean it took her so long to get she got transmigrated

Richie520
Richie520
1 years ago
Commented

understandable

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The Devil's Entice

The Devil's Entice

Fantasy · Joshan_Jo

Richie520
Richie520
1 years ago
Commented

wow!!! the words have life in them

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The Devil's Entice

The Devil's Entice

Fantasy · Joshan_Jo

Richie520
Richie520
1 years ago
Commented

yeah...a forest is no less than a maze

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The Devil's Entice

The Devil's Entice

Fantasy · Joshan_Jo

Richie520
Richie520
1 years ago
Commented

trust ur instincts

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The Devil's Entice

The Devil's Entice

Fantasy · Joshan_Jo

Richie520
Richie520
1 years ago
Commented

omg!! the title!!! is it a bait??

Richie520
Richie520
1 years ago
Commented

This is well explained.

  • Strangers in love original

    Strangers in love

    Fantasy ROMANCE MYSTERY BETRAYAL REVENGE BEAUTY

    4.85

    "It's time to go Alex". "Can't we just stay here?"Alex asked with a mixture of emotions in his voice."We have to disappear to be powerful."Adam spoke with determination and rage filled in his honey coloured eyes."Powerful" Alex repeated the word absorbing the same feeling from his brother. After 15 years... According to the annual reports of the year, Envision, the biggest company in the world now has once again proved its worth. Envision managed to contribute a large percent towards Silbon's economy this year... "I'm sure they will definitely fall in our trap now", Elina declared. "The Collins have no way to escape this time", Marina didn't say anything.Elina's face went pale. She said it but, she just can't feel it.Marina placed a hand on Elina's shoulder while her eyes gave a look saying:" I can understand ", as she was facing the same conflict in her heart.Love or revenge? "Aren't you falling for her?" Carter asked while handing his drink. Eric sighed."Are you sure?", Carter asked once again to confirm. Eric didn't reply. "Eric, we have things to wrap up." "I know. I didn't forget anything." Eric said in a low voice but with confirmation. "How is Elina?" Eric asked this time. "Don't know"Carter leaned back in his chair.Eric smiled seeing worry in his brother's eyes for Elina."Bro, at least now be honest with yourself ", saying this, Eric left the room leaving carter alone with his heart. Sometimes the one you love the most turns out to be the one whom you hate the most. Will they get rid of their hatred and discover their love? How destiny made them to meet again? Can their love survive in this game of revenge? Can love win against hatred? ------ This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, places and incidents are either the product of the author's imagination or are used fictitiously and any resemblance to any actual person living or dead, events and locales is entirely coincidental. *** Thanks to our family and mother for all the support and help***

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