PWOFalcon

PWOFalcon

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A new writer that is learning how to write

2019-09-13 Joined United States
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PWOFalcon
PWOFalcon
2 years ago
Replied to Thiago_Gomes_8808

Muchísimas gracias. No tienes idea de lo difícil que fue para mí decidir terminarlo. Me alegra que mucha gente sienta lo mismo.

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PWOFalcon
3 years ago
Replied to Lost_0ne

It is not about forgetting, it is the lack of use in a story, remember this (and other stories) are stories. Mortars are limited short range, have to be set up, etc. When you have characters fighting the bad guys, a mortar usually are not needed or best option. Let me give you a example how I decide what I use. When I have Sharpe go into a battle situation, I have a list of what support units like air support, artillery, mortars, gunships, tanks, etc. Then I pick the most logical one I think for that situation. In addition, Vanguard teams (as usual in most war stories) are usually fast pace, going where you need them to be, mortars cannot follow that but artillery and air support can can (both have far longer range and more of a impact). Now, this is just my opinion as I am not a professional writer or served in the military (thank you for your service), I just rarely run into a situation where that is the best option to use/show. It really just depends on what story the author is writing and locations.

PWOFalcon
PWOFalcon
3 years ago
Replied to Triparadox

Putting two and two together. If NATO can fight at night that means they can see at night somehow. If you see a missile following a dragon or something the human mind tries to find the answers. It is more of a educated guess because some monsters like dragons and snakes see with heat and can hunt at night, and NATO can. Maybe there is something similar.

"My master believes they can see our heat. We will need to build the trenches deep and place dirt cover above, to help hide our troops form their sights." Frayen explains. "Either way, this should help protect our troops from being directly shot at by their arrows."

Gate: War of Two Worlds Part 1

Gate: War of Two Worlds Part 1

Anime & Comics · PWOFalcon

PWOFalcon
PWOFalcon
3 years ago
Replied to Triparadox

Thank you. Will need to revisit that.

PWOFalcon
PWOFalcon
3 years ago
Replied to Triparadox

Actually, this is around the time I dropped the original. Up to now I was only using it as a foundation as this was my first story and figuring things out

"Vanguard-7, this is Angel-2. We are beginning clean-up operations. You have ten seconds to clear the courtyard." The pilot of the Apache attack helicopter said over the radio.

Gate: War of Two Worlds Part 1

Gate: War of Two Worlds Part 1

Anime & Comics · PWOFalcon

PWOFalcon
PWOFalcon
3 years ago
Replied to Sullen_Kitten_2861

It was recorded from a camera on Sharpe.

PWOFalcon
PWOFalcon
3 years ago
Replied to Sullen_Kitten_2861

War is hell

PWOFalcon
PWOFalcon
3 years ago
Replied to Sullen_Kitten_2861

Thank you

  • Gate: War of Two Worlds Part 2 original

    Gate: War of Two Worlds Part 2

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE SLICEOFLIFE GATE

    4.27 Completed

    As the War of Two Worlds continues, Lieutenant Colonel Jackson Sharpe and the rest of Vanguard-7 must face the new challenges to win the war and lead Vanguard-7 and the rest of Vanguard Rapid Task Force 2 (Sharpe’s Rifles) through Falmart. While the Empire has suffered many defeats in the first year of the war, their resolve has only gotten stronger. Forming the Falmart League with the Ticaret Conglomerate and the Swestuals Kingdoms, the Empire strength has only increased. The NATO Alliance is growing and continue to show their technology might however will that be enough to face what Uros has to offer? Sharpe must face his past, the present, and the future on this strange new world as he understands his role in all of this. With his close friends Rory, Lelei, Tuke, and Yao, can he overcome his past and lead them to victory? While he made many other friends like the Legrath Knights to the Rose Knights, he has also made many enemies, some that he has yet meet. Gate: War of Two Worlds Part 1: https://www.wattpad.com/story/180912336-gate-war-of-two-worlds-part-1 Pictures here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/200736076-gate-wotw-pictures written by Takumi Yanai and illustrated by Daisuke Izuka and Kurojish, all rights remain with them. Currently being ported to Webnovel, Fan Fiction and Royalroad under the same book name and username.

    102 Chs 585 Collections

  • Gate: War of Two Worlds Shorts original

    Gate: War of Two Worlds Shorts

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE SLICEOFLIFE WATTPAD GATE

    As the war continue, their are many stories that are untold. Voices, perspectives, battles, characters, and more that get lost between the bigger picture. These stories are to show another side of a long and bloody war. I will be posting this story on RoyalRoad, Wattpad, and Fanfiction,

    23 Chs 63 Collections

  • Gate: War of Two Worlds Part 1 original

    Gate: War of Two Worlds Part 1

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE SLICEOFLIFE GATE

    4.64 Completed

    This story has original character, original story, original locations and factions. The Gate story is a baseline for a far grander world that I have planned. Note: Volume 1 is a mix of Gate cannon and original work. Volume 2 is mostly a copy of the Italica Arc. Starting Chapter 25 is when the book becomes mostly original with only light story arcs from the gate cannon but with my twist.

    166 Chs 1.7k Collections