LordHermes

A beautiful story, not what I would normally read but it's a nice change of pace. I strongly recommend you read the story and I assure you that it won't be regretted.

While the idea certainly is quite interesting, even for me who loves trashy fantasy stories, I just felt that its not the best it could be. In the inner monologue it feels quite repetitive hearing ''I''. Overall I think this is quite the good story and look forward to how future chapters will pan out!

I actually do use grammarly. The reason there a re mistakes in the story is because I use UK English spelling instead of US English spelling

I'm glad, Imma hit the bed. I have written about half of the next chapter so I need some rest lol

I would strongly recommend people keep a close watch on this story. It has the potential to become the next big story. To have a story being written at the same time as this worries me a little about my work. I am glad you are working hard on this! Keep up the good work!

The world background is very detailed, some may say it is an issue but its I think it's good to know what there is to know. There is plenty to read in every chapter and there are so many of them. If you need to keep an eye on an author I think it's this one. This story will blossom into something incredible before you know it!

Thank you thank you. The reason its wordy is mainly because it was originally written in the style of a novel, not a webnovel. I just split up the original chapter into two. I promise future chapters won't be too heavy to read unless its something important!

Thank you for your advice, I will take it into consideration !