Writing quality: Loved it, I enjoy longer paragraphs detailing the cold and dark atmosphere of the area introduced so far. Story Development: Unique, got me interested for more chapters as I hope that Mors would feel younger again than his current age. Character Design: An actual old MC and not being reincarnated immediately after? I am in, I'm interested to see the old man do some karate. (joke) Updating Stability: Give Author his much needed time and he'll deliver a nice chapter to read. World Background: I like the introduction so far with the state of this Cursed universe. I might give the other book a read one day, hopefully Author won't drop his works.
*dun dun dun* What a start, oooh exciting!
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This is awfully cute.
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Fantasy · Unknown_AR
Same!
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Fantasy · Unknown_AR
"And he was meant" right? Just gotta help out with the misspells since I do have them as well haha. Loving it so far, as I don't mind long paragraphs in particular.
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Fantasy · Unknown_AR
The fact that both names belonged to the same person made me wonder who could it really be. I jest, you must've meant Kian! I really wanted him to be the fan favourite thanks to his optimistic outlook and willingness to help those in the name of justice. Thanks for the review, friend!
I'm interested in the stories between these introduced characters in the fantasy world, I was already into the military man getting isekai'd and I just can't wait to know more about the MC's addition to the fantasy era! More pls!
Very impressed with this book's start so far, loved how fitting you included the perspective writing that it flows well and rolls off the tongue. Maybe, I should ask you to become my teacher of proofreading, haha! Anyway, I can't wait to see more of the story as it goes on! Keep it up, ya legend! Loved the MC's friend, such a fun character with his exploitative tricks.
Get you a friend like this in gaming.
"You can have this one, I made one for you in preparation for this." Nightingale replied earnestly.
Games · JiyoJ
And here's the hiatus shall be for a tiny bit. Needed to edit all and bring everything back into the docs so that I can easily find the mentions and whatnots in the previous chapters since I've been forgetful lately. I will try to bring out better written chapters rather than consistent updates with major errors to the plotline and whatnot. Hope you all beautiful readers can understand from reading this chapter or wondering why isn't there any updates lately.
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Fantasy · Xalysian