An excellent story! One of the best I've had the good fortune to stumble upon while randomly looking for something to read. The pacing is excellent, the character and world design is well thought out, the update speed is up there with the best, and other than some minor grammar and spelling errors the writing is solid. 10 out of 10, I'm about to read it again.
Thinking out loud is a shockingly excellent way to organize one's thoughts. it's also a shockingly excellent way to get called a crazy person. :^)
Althea narrowed her eyes at him suspiciously and Garan just found her adorable. "I may be able to input some ideas," he told her. "Even if I don't, uttering them out could help you organize your thoughts."
After Surviving the Apocalypse, I Built a City in Another World
Fantasy · NispedanaSan
Is it finished yet?
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Reincarnated As a Fox With System
Fantasy · godadi
I'd use restless or agitated instead of unrestful. Love your novels, ya do a stellar job!
Tourists immediately ran to the airports, trying to leave the country, and the citizens grew unrestful. The Hunters down below could only watch and do nothing much; nobody could simply fly and fight a huge floating chunk of metal.
The Heavenly Martial Empress Returns: An OP Xianxia Returnee LitRPG
Action · PancakesWitch
More like bad breath lol
Additionally, by channeling Mana and Ki into your tongue and throat, it is possible to unleash a deadly {Venom Dragon Breath}, releasing dark green flames that can both burn and poison foes, dealing up to 500% Fire and Poison Attribute Damage on foes while ignoring 30% of their Elemental Resistances. These Venom Flames can inflict [Burning Rot], [Venomous Decay], and [Agonizing Pain] Status Effects on foes.
The Protagonist’s Sister Is Actually The Strongest
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
lol, love the food comparison.
It was hard look to look at his eyes and lips because it only reminded Chunhua of the kiss. The memory was like sticky glutinous rice in her mind, it was hard to erase.
The Cannon Fodder in the Global Apocalypse Game lives a leisurely life
Fantasy · The_Sweet_Dumpling
*tree
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Abyssal Awakening
Fantasy · Reili
Whew! I'm glad one of us understands, cause I don't.....
"I'll seal your power! {Divine Emerald Flame Dual Blade Arts}: {Twelve Meridian-Sealing Stabs}!"
The Heavenly Martial Empress Returns: An OP Xianxia Returnee LitRPG
Action · PancakesWitch
true dat, she is light incarnate, and as every middle school science student knows, light is a wave! or a photon, sometimes, or maybe both at once if it feels like it... either way, no meridians in either form of light.
"I'll seal your power! {Divine Emerald Flame Dual Blade Arts}: {Twelve Meridian-Sealing Stabs}!"
The Heavenly Martial Empress Returns: An OP Xianxia Returnee LitRPG
Action · PancakesWitch
light power generator? maybe?
The building was installed with a natural gas pipe; she didn't need a LPG, but it's a different story when the disaster comes.
Natural Disasters Strikes: I stockpiled like crazy!
Urban · The_Sweet_Dumpling