any new novels?
"That tall figure in the Xiao family costume is Xiao Shan, so the handsome young man beside him must be Xiao Ming, right?"
Anime & Comics · Kisshot
who's ja sun
[Konoha Student: You have taken your first steps into becoming a part of the continental child-soldier program. Praise be the Will of Fire.
Anime & Comics · FanHarem
u okay?
Her red hair immediately stood out from the crowd of blondes, brunettes, and black haired individuals that I had met so far. Her blue eyes were perhaps her most ordinary feature, though that didn't lessen her beauty in the slightest but rather complimented her aesthetic nicely:
Fantasy · Fnatic_Fan
what's your next work?
can't blame him, I'm not about to die over a stupid battle either
I love my current life too much: my sister, my mother, and my teacher, that I won't risk it by fighting these shounen anime-esque battles with razor thin odds of victory. I won't fight a 50/50, nor would I do a 60/40. Hell, even a 70/30 is way too risky for me. At the very least, it should be a 90/10. NO—I would make it a 90/10 or even a 100/0.
Fantasy · Fnatic_Fan
lol, nthn wrong with her pleasuring herself. especially since she's not in a relationship
Laurel's coat only covered her shoulders and arms, while her underwear only covered her most intimate parts and I could see the young butler stealing glances and ogling at her body every now and then, unable to hide the craving in his eyes. He's even touching her lips every time he brings a grape to her mouth.
Fantasy · Fnatic_Fan
personally I think it's better this way right now, otherwise a lot of what he wants to do and has done so far wouldn't have been even remotely possible. also, it adds to character depth
imp? what's that
I remember when she released her mana earlier, it was actually enough to make me feel like I was suffocating and I felt her real strength. I knew she meant to scare me, but it just made her all the more attractive in my eyes. Having someone as powerful as that, pressed under you is just… Mmm.
Fantasy · Fnatic_Fan
are you not used to writing from another characters pov? It doesn't really detract from the story heck i could even be overthinking it, Riel's internal thoughts and monologues feel more natural. for the mom and a few other times for other povs, its's kinda hard to explain but like even though its in 1st person it almost feels a bit too objective like it's a 3rd person observation and they're not the concerned party. man I'm bad at this. basically even though she's talking about the situation that just happened and the state of her body, it almost feels like it's not her. she felt more like a person from Riels's pov. Also, thanks for the chapter, ik writing can be pretty difficult and taxing, especially considering your releases are free.
Even if I was in a physical relationship with him, I am still his Mother whom he should respect. I'm still someone above him, the head of this household. I felt like he was disrespecting me, for him to pin me down while repeatedly smacking my ass around like he owned me. I felt incensed thinking about him pulling me by my hair or when he shut me up by fucking me in the mouth.
Fantasy · Fnatic_Fan
hmmm shameless author review? my overall rating isn't all that high since I'm currently unaware of my own writing capabilities. like it's been super long so what I'll do is make a new review everytime I feel as though I've grown. currently? it's definitely not the best story but hey, it's one i made after thinking a lot so I'm pretty confident. well at least I hope so. world building consumed a lot of my time so i think it's fair if i rate at least that as a 5.
Echoes of Evolution
Fantasy · Lord_Pendragon