Wowthatsalongname

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Wowthatsalongname
Wowthatsalongname
2 years ago
Commented

100*100*6 = 60,000. :/

Wowthatsalongname
Wowthatsalongname
3 years ago
Replied to Wowthatsalongname

line break between the "man continued" and the ""blah blah blah"" part.

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Draga of the Vanguard

Draga of the Vanguard

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Wowthatsalongname
Wowthatsalongname
3 years ago
Replied to doodlyy

I like how for me the author comment was the comment at the bottom of the entire list. XD

Wowthatsalongname
Wowthatsalongname
3 years ago
Posted

Pretty cool, but two big problems: -The story is Very infrequently updated, like 6 months long updated, most of the time I question if it's dropped or not by the time the author bothers to upload a chapter. -The story is a bit of personal insert MC, and a power trip of the authors.

Wowthatsalongname
Wowthatsalongname
3 years ago
Replied to doodlyy

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Wowthatsalongname
Wowthatsalongname
3 years ago
Posted

What can I say, but the fact that this has been dropped so long I don't remember what the story is even about anymore, and that the story was removed so I can't even tell you what this used to be about, all i remember is that the story used to be pretty good though, don't know why it dropped?

Wowthatsalongname
Wowthatsalongname
3 years ago
Replied to Wowthatsalongname

I meant to say that the chapters are a bit too long, and that it's a trial to get to the end of them sometimes, Sorry for the mix up!

Wowthatsalongname
Wowthatsalongname
3 years ago
Posted

Great story, except for: the fact that it's dropped, and that the story is a bit all over the place, and that the grammar is a little bad, and that the chapters are just short enough to be annoying for me but not enough to lower the story by a star. Other than that, 10/10.

Wowthatsalongname
Wowthatsalongname
3 years ago
Posted

Great story was dropped, now sad. other than that, 10/10, though you could use a bit more spaces, and not a wall of text for every chapter. Story is great, Characters great, world is explained enough to understand the story, but could use a bit more explanation.

Wowthatsalongname
Wowthatsalongname
3 years ago
Replied to Polaris123

lol

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