I think...
Melee combat was not even their true area of competence, unlike his, yet that was exactly what Sunny had forced upon them.
Fantasy · Guiltythree
unlike him*
Melee combat was not even their true area of competence, unlike his, yet that was exactly what Sunny had forced upon them.
Fantasy · Guiltythree
I might be overstepping my bounds here but writing suggestion: His body -> This* body To drive home the loss of ownership
His body shifted strangely, bending at unnatural angles. The invisible force was pulling it apart, the flesh straining on the verge of ripping, to better fit into the great structure of the shadow of Condemnation. His bones groaned, ready to break.
Fantasy · Guiltythree
to react to with* foresight
Even using his mastery of Shadow Dance to predict the enemy's movements, Sunny was struggling to keep up. That was because the archer was simply too fast and aggressive to react to this foresight, and even if he did, the predictions Sunny made seemed to fail him half of the time.
Fantasy · Guiltythree
From a/this* distance
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Fantasy · Guiltythree
They'd have to deal with hiatuses which I'm not certain they'd be patient for lol
Was how Sunny became a hero of the Sword Army.
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Passed away is plausible, the saving thus preventing what would have been passing away.
"Oh, yes. I heard she had healed him moments before he passed away… also that the enchanted bell was her gift to him, and that she comes running every time he rings it... lucky bastard!"
Fantasy · Guiltythree
She was saved after irreversible damage was done to her
Versatile Mage
Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)