Fan_Mo_5836

Fan_Mo_5836

male LV 4

Accepting all challengers.

2019-07-29 Joined China
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Fan_Mo_5836
Fan_Mo_5836
2 days ago
Replied to Faiz_Alam_8284

She was saved after irreversible damage was done to her

Fan_Mo_5836
Fan_Mo_5836
2 days ago
Replied to Fan_Mo_5836

I think...

Melee combat was not even their true area of competence, unlike his, yet that was exactly what Sunny had forced upon them. 

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Shadow Slave

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Fan_Mo_5836
Fan_Mo_5836
2 days ago
Commented

unlike him*

Melee combat was not even their true area of competence, unlike his, yet that was exactly what Sunny had forced upon them. 

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

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Fan_Mo_5836
Fan_Mo_5836
3 days ago
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Fan_Mo_5836
5 days ago
Commented

I might be overstepping my bounds here but writing suggestion: His body -> This* body To drive home the loss of ownership

His body shifted strangely, bending at unnatural angles. The invisible force was pulling it apart, the flesh straining on the verge of ripping, to better fit into the great structure of the shadow of Condemnation. His bones groaned, ready to break. 

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

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Fan_Mo_5836
Fan_Mo_5836
6 days ago
Commented

to react to with* foresight

Even using his mastery of Shadow Dance to predict the enemy's movements, Sunny was struggling to keep up. That was because the archer was simply too fast and aggressive to react to this foresight, and even if he did, the predictions Sunny made seemed to fail him half of the time. 

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Shadow Slave

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Fan_Mo_5836
Fan_Mo_5836
9 days ago
Commented

From a/this* distance

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Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

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Fan_Mo_5836
9 days ago
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Fan_Mo_5836
16 days ago
Replied to Vicvic0

They'd have to deal with hiatuses which I'm not certain they'd be patient for lol

Was how Sunny became a hero of the Sword Army.

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Shadow Slave

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Fan_Mo_5836
Fan_Mo_5836
16 days ago
Replied to Nazrish

Passed away is plausible, the saving thus preventing what would have been passing away.

"Oh, yes. I heard she had healed him moments before he passed away… also that the enchanted bell was her gift to him, and that she comes running every time he rings it... lucky bastard!" 

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Shadow Slave

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