Incognito0001 - Profile

I don't particularly think the story is bad or anything just that I am the wrong audience. I find extra/background char becoming real MC stories entertaining and fun, but this one in particular felt very annoying to read? 🤔 Like good % of the chapters are mostly useless words/fillers and the important parts are vit frustrating to read and when I open comments the authoe writes "It gets better" well 180 chapters in it still hasn't 👏 😀

The story is mid but the translation makes it unreadable because character names and pronouns are all over the place

ye I might have been a little bit harsh, but moving forward I recommend focusing more on the basics like grammar/char design/plot progression and maybe revisit older chapters and at least improve the grammar. if you are using this novel as a way to improve your skills then 1/ chap a day isn't really necessary, focus on quality over quantity and if anything create an amazing second book 😅idk the ideas are clearly there, just need to work on that execution, I know writing is 100 times harder than reading and I am not trying to trample on your effort if that's how my review looked like, I just got a lil annoyed because the idea was there, exactly the genre I love reading but just was off... idk keep it up, hard work usually pays off if you grind long enough

writing quality isn't the worst but far bellow the standards of what the rating of the book would suggest, basically reviews seem lil fake 😅 honestly just barely better than some mtl novels that webnovel puts out. story development is very weird at times, there is no pace to it, stuff just happens without a good reason, basically a lot of forced plots just because you as the author can do it i guess. I guess it's due to being an inexperienced author and it's hard to make that plot development seem more natural you, idk... probably know about this problem yourself. characters are honestly bad... like they aren't even budget author pov's copies, copies so bad that it's insulting to the originals. Ye I said it, might seem harsh but that's the reality of things, you have 30+ reviews telling you how good the book is, but it's not.... not even close. the idea it self is good but execution is way off I could go in deeper but I won't lol, maybe will check this book out again in the far future and write another review 🥱