StarWolf250

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StarWolf250
StarWolf250
8 months ago
Posted

Hello guys, StarWolf here *ฅ^•ﻌ•^ฅ*This is my first novel! I hope you don't chew me out too bad XD But I would appreciate any feedback (good or bad). English is not my mother tongue. Hope this work is readable. Now to the story. It's about a guy traveling to different worlds. They are based on classical fairytales (and by that, I mean the ones where not everything is happy ever after - good examples are Brothers Grimm stories) like Snow White or Red Riding Hood ... it is just this time something went a bit wrong. What would happen if some characters were a bit more sinister and others not as they seem at first glance? Well, let's find out!

StarWolf250
StarWolf250
8 months ago
Posted

Hello guys, StarWolf here *ฅ^•ﻌ•^ฅ*This is my first novel! I hope you don't chew me out too bad XD But I would appreciate any feedback (good or bad). English is not my mother tongue. Hope this work is readable.Now to the story. It's about a guy traveling to different worlds. They are based on classical fairytales (and by that, I mean the ones where not everything is happy ever after - good examples are Brothers Grimm stories) like Snow White or Red Riding Hood ... it is just this time something went a bit wrong. What would happen if some characters were a bit more sinister and others not as they seem at first glance? Well, let's find out!

StarWolf250
StarWolf250
9 months ago
Commented

Wow! Is it really necessary to lower yourself to the same level as the people you clearly hate so much? One thing I really can't understand is why are you so triggered by the issues with power scaling in the TV show? You are acting like its's some terrible affront to you personally even though it's something very common in most tv shows... chill out a bit