Daylee

I am new in this.... pls help me evaluate my work.. I am still in college and trying my hands in writing... please rate my story and review on it... !!!...? ...................

the female protagonist had lost her childhood best friend and her first love... as in the tragic end when she was unable to let go the past memories... someone entered in her life.... helping to make her move on... he didn't knew when he fall for her.... ... ... but she was as cold as ice.... it was very hard to melt the layers of her heart.... .... ...... will he be able to make her love again... and help her found her lost Heart.... ..... ... ... ... ... .. ... as mentioned... in my thoughts.... this story's plot was inspired by my true life's surrounding circumstances... but it has nothing to do with reality..... the story is purely fictional and characters are imaginary... ... .. as a new writer kindly review my work and also rate me.... help me in improving my writing.. so that I can give you all better works... thank you ?