Zyn_Gamemaster

Zyn_Gamemaster

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"Just because you swim in the ocean does not mean you know its currents, you can only know them thru observation." "Meditation is not stillness of mind but observing it."

2019-06-12 Joined United States
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7 months ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

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4 years ago
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Ok so this is a decent story with alot of cring and some badass moments. I like the somewhat fast pace power scaling in novels since I myself dont like super long buildups and like seeing OP characters Rule the world and deal with the power. But to me in this novel there is alot that the MC can do but chooses to be a simp instead. I still read this story but the MC is lack luster the world building is nice most of the time. I do like some of the side characters and the out of the box thinking in some of the chapters. I would love to see more ingenuity since the MC still doesnt have a refined base to his power it would be nice to see that neglect bite him in the a$$.But my rating stands its still a decent read and yes I do use coins on this book I still Harbour high hopes for this story. Good work over all author keep refining your craft it will get better.

  • Akina's Tale original

    Akina's Tale

    Fantasy ADVENTURE MAGIC PRINCESS

    Outline of a novel idea I want to test on the community. Please leave any questions, comments and concerns in the comment section. If you all like the outline I will upload 3 times a week or more at my availability. please and thank you for the read.

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