The concept is very interesting. The writing style leaves a lot to the imagination and interpretation of the reader. The pacing is ok with a few weird tangents in the plot. But overall what surprised me the most was the direction the story took in the beginning. Having a great concept perfect for a power fantasy. Then quickly switched the direction to one that is more aligned to that of a revenge fantasy. I am interested to see more, if only just to know where this is going.
The concept is very interesting. The writing style leaves a lot to the imagination and interpretation of the reader. The pacing is ok with a few weird tangents in the plot. But overall what surprised me the most was the direction the story took in the beginning. Having a great concept perfect for a power fantasy. Then quickly switched the direction to one that is more aligned to that of a revenge fantasy. I am interested to see more, if only just to know where this is going.
The Hunter That Returned From Hell(MOVED)
Urban · Rish_madara