Majestica

3 years ago

Commented

that 🤕 hurts I could even feel that pain

When the food has been settled down on the table, she remembered that she has a game to finish. She accidentally pressed her injured foot on the floor as she attempted to rush towards her room. With that action she realized there was a glass splinter on her foot-- when she confidently thought that she only got a skin cut on her foot from those pieces. She could have doubled check it before rushing, but she was not thinking about it at all. So much for trying to ignore it.

If The Moon Can Be Counted As A Star

Urban · Write_D_Words

Majestica

3 years ago

Commented

*jingle bells* [img=recommend][img=recommend]

Fading out background noise of Christmas music reminded the woman that it was nearly the end of November. She used to be excited about it but not any more.

If The Moon Can Be Counted As A Star

Urban · Write_D_Words

Majestica

3 years ago

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 0 1 ▫Prologue▫

Dark Light Nights

Sci-fi · Write_D_Words

Majestica

3 years ago

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

ch 0 1 ▫Prologue▫

Dark Light Nights

Sci-fi · Write_D_Words

Majestica

3 years ago

Posted

Hi author , remember me? I was here reviewing two months ago and you did not fail to amuse me , again! Dark Light Nights progress: Writing Quality: over the past months , i notice you become more active in showing and it is a good sign. You need to focus more on what you wanted to feel in writing your book than coming back to see typos and it is fine to have that. Everyone has typo problems. Updating Stability: See your book is not just about words to enjoy , it feels I am watching a movie. For me , i like it. I like how you do it! Story Development: I thought it was a normal conflict but as I read further , it becomes scary , romantic , literature ,funny and mixed with amazing setups. Character Design: Ciana started as a pleasing character , then she became sensitive as the story developes. Everyone in the story has unique names , lively personalities that blends in! World Background: Arkedss may not described completely yet but i read and picture out the clans location and style, and to think about it—just takes me to another level of the world. The way you explain it , i do not know but for me , It is fantastic. HOPING TO READ MORE, AND I HOPE SOME READERS WOULD NOT GIVE UP READING THIS NOVEL DUE TO THE COINS ! YOU WOULD NOT REGRET READING EACH CHAPTER, THE NOVEL IS CREATED WELL! Do not forget to rest too fellow Author.[img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=recommend]