dylan_lallement

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2019-06-05 Joined France
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dylan_lallement
dylan_lallement
3 years ago
Commented

Its your story so write what you like first because if the autor dont like his own story we wont be able to like it

dylan_lallement
dylan_lallement
3 years ago
Replied to deter

That would be a good answer

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dylan_lallement
dylan_lallement
3 years ago
Commented

Good start looking for the following chapter

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dylan_lallement
3 years ago
Commented

A-Continue the story because it wasn't as bad as you depicte it and often when people start a novel anew they dont have the will to truly do it

dylan_lallement
dylan_lallement
3 years ago
Commented

good start changing from what we usualy see so keep going on man

dylan_lallement
dylan_lallement
3 years ago
Commented

Nice chapter keep the armor for now it would be the best choice in my opinion

dylan_lallement
dylan_lallement
3 years ago
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Good story with interesting ideas keep the good work

dylan_lallement
dylan_lallement
3 years ago
Commented

Nice story with fun MC keep the good work

dylan_lallement
dylan_lallement
3 years ago
Commented

Nice start and a MC with potential keep the good work