Books_for_life

Books_for_life

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I utterly HATE romance harem ntr fan service smart then somehow dumb mc stupid bustygirls that hate on the mc for no reason or snide racist and/or sexist comments from any maleORfemale in the story

2019-05-25 Joined Global
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Books_for_life
Books_for_life
1 years ago
Posted

Hmm...🫡...well it's not good.This story has a very very incompetent writing style. For one its not very consistent. Many plot holes(tbh the plot is barely there in the first place).Sexualizes woman🤢 way too much.(in the first chapter one of main characters is almost assaulted and althogh she doesn't let it happen. the narrative then says "its not like she doesn't want it ,its just he was being mean about it."🤐🤨.like ...................HUH. anyways i think you could do a WHOLE lot better than this by first proofreading before posting and also tweaking the premise by a little. maybe don't use sexual assault to start off your story and then make it seem as though the character wanted it😶🤥.also you described the woman as of they are all in some weird porno narrative 😶‍🌫️🫣

Books_for_life
Books_for_life
2 years ago
Commented

can any tell me if this will become a harem or a romance? ,cause I really dislike both I want to know if this is actually worth continuing my read

Books_for_life
Books_for_life
2 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Books_for_life
Books_for_life
4 years ago
Posted

please give this book your vote today it looks super badness.

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